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To Be Human {Chapter 20}

Jan 04, 2014 20:55

To Be Human {Chapter 20}
Title: To Be Human
Author: fel93
Length: Chaptered (2863 words for this chapter)
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakuraiba
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Drama, Fantasy, Futuristic, Angst, Romance
Disclaimer: Nuh-uh, sadly, they’re not mine
Summary: What happens when Ohno gets lost, and meets someone who is not quite like him

( And Ohno wishes, more than anything he’d ever wished for, for Jun’s words to be true. )

Comments 21

coolohoh January 4 2014, 17:29:00 UTC

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Nino has to be alright! And just what exactly is the wisp!

fel93 January 4 2014, 17:42:34 UTC

Hello! :D Hmm what is the wisp?

This is from chapter 16, an explanation on the Wisp that Jun gave! :

“The Wisp is an ancient magical being. Many thought that it is merely a legend, but well, they are wrong. It’s better for them to remain clueless so that they don’t come searching for The Wisp. The Wisp, is somewhat, a guardian of you robots. Maybe it is a little bold and presumptuous to say this, but I believe most robots are dissatisfied with being merely robots. They are envious of humans and can’t help thinking how their lives would be like if they are actually humans.”

The three robots did not seem to disagree with what Jun had said. Jun continues.

“Hence, The Wisp grants robots’ wishes to become human. But only under a few conditions.”

The wisp will come back again sometime later so maybe then you'd understand it more! ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting like always! <3

coolohoh January 4 2014, 17:44:21 UTC

ah i see, totally forgot about Jun's explanation by now... but i mean like... why did and how did the wisp manipulate nino like this?

*tries to be patient in waiting for the next chapter* XD

midshadow January 4 2014, 17:53:17 UTC

It's amazing how you've kept this up so long! Otsukare! It's such a great series~
Because of this chapter now I look at my electrical appliances and go, oh no low batt, I need to save it!! Haha! :P

fel93 January 5 2014, 06:42:35 UTC

Haha I know right! Even I'm surprised at myself!
Hahaha! xD how cool would it be if we can be recharged instantly like robots! (:

reisakurano January 5 2014, 20:49:02 UTC

What are you doing to him?? ;___;
poor bb~
I hope Jun can fix him!!! <3

fel93 January 7 2014, 03:07:16 UTC

I'm sorry! DDD:

But I'll make it all right again don't worry! ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

senna23 January 6 2014, 08:08:35 UTC

and tadah, I am here! High five! ;D

Frankly, the part between Nino & Ohno was heart-wrenching 'cause I can just imagine it-- my favorite part despite the parting. Like the latter, I want to believe to Jun's words to bring him back. But I wonder, if the Wisp will come in the picture...butttt I'll leave that to you~

On other note, I can totally relate about what you went through writing a series; I think that's what I'm going through as well. *sighs*

I'll be honest, I didn't read this the first time you posted it but when I had the time I was hooked so I am happy that you made such a series. I'm looking forward to the ending :))

And gambatte to your studies!

fel93 January 7 2014, 03:11:49 UTC

High five too! :DDD

Aww I'm glad that its your favorite part! To be honest, even though i was being kinda sadistic, but thats my fav part too! Hehe!

Hang on! You have to finish the series! :D You'd feel so accomplished after this! ^^ I'm going to read what you wrote so that i can support you too! (:

Haha its okay that you didn't read it when i first posted it! It takes a lot to convince me to start reading a series too cos I don't like waiting for updates and i may just forget about the plot after waiting. (That's why i feel so bad for posting so irregularly cos it disrupts the reading ): ). But im glad you gave it a chance and find that you're enjoying it! :D

I look forward to reading your fanfics and all the best to you too! ^^

gambitsfox January 6 2014, 16:59:30 UTC

Ugh! Only a few more chapters left!? I'm going to miss this story when it's over.
Iike the part with Nino getting torn apart....very dramatic and heart breaking at the same time. I liked the comment someone said about human/robot sex.....will there be any? : )

fel93 January 7 2014, 03:14:31 UTC

Me too! I'll miss it! ): But don't worry! I'll post drabbles or one-shots in this universe so that we can still visit the characters! (: I am excited to write about them in the daily-life settings!

Heh sorry I don't think i'm going to write about human/robot sex hahaha cos i don't really know how to write about this! But I can make it up with cuddlesssss! ^~^ I <3 cuddles! :D

Thanks for reading and commenting like always! <3