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feline_feral

Fic: Run. PG

Aug 16, 2010 02:52

Notes: Written for this prompt over at

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sherlock, fic

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Pun, how I love thee! pearljamz August 17 2010, 18:54:20 UTC

Been hoping to see 'No shit, Sherlock', and viola! Well done!

Re: Pun, how I love thee! feline_feral August 18 2010, 02:11:21 UTC

It's one of the few puns I will allow for. ^_^... Glad to give you what you where opening for.

disassembly_rsn August 22 2010, 07:02:06 UTC

"Every time Anderson opened his mouth whole streets got dumber." :)

"Nothing of interest. Flatmate has the attention span of a child. JW" Very good exchange there. :)

Some minor nitpicks (yes, I'm the type of person who liked the opening of The Great Game):

"risen and eyebrow" should be "raised an eyebrow"
"He was far to use to Sherlock’s actions" should have "used" rather than "use"
"Donavon" should be "Donovan"
"loose sight of" should be "lose sight of"

feline_feral August 22 2010, 14:40:00 UTC

Thanks for reading, and thanks for commenting on the errors.

I am also the type of person that liked the opening of The Great Game. I'm shuddering at the errors you pointed out. :)

lindor1306 February 16 2011, 21:09:38 UTC

Lol! I would quite happily sleep with the WHOLE cast and crew for them to actually use the line No shit, Sherlock in the show. Of course, in the interests of fairness, I'd sleep with Martin Freeman twice because he'd be the one to say it, Mark Gatiss twice because he's cast AND crew, and Benedict Cumberbatch lots of times because he's Benedict Cumberbatch!

Anyway... FAB fic!! Very lolsome!