FIC: Risen (Chapter 5/?)

[felinemuse]

Title: Risen: Chapter Five. (5/?)
Fandom: Real People / 30 Seconds To Mars.
Pairing: Jared/Shannon (only alluded to in this chapter).
Prompt: Table 2; #68 - Scatter. (100_situations)
Word Count: 2467.
Rating: R.
Warnings: vampirism, emerging psychosis, incestual tones.
Overall Summary: In the words of Supernatural -- what's dead should stay dead. But what

Comments

[kit84]

I have no idea how you do it, but I love the edge of danger in your supernatural fics. And the best thing is, there's a definite difference between them. Each fic has it's own...flavour. And I'm totally fucking addicted to them all. ♥

Loved Jared's introspection here -- the bit about him being almost a childlike was especially made of win. Lot of feelings in a few short paragraphs.

Absolutely adored this hon, the ending to this part was fucking perfect ♥ ♥

(I would like more now plz kthnx)

[felinemuse]

Thaaank you. It's hard to work the danger in there sometimes (well okay, a lot of the time), or more to know if it's actually there, or if I'm just hoping that the reader will find it there. I've been working more with pacing and word choice to try and help with that, help set the mood, but I don't feel I'm skilled enough with it yet so every time it kind of feels like I'm flipping a coin. Will it work, won't it work, will they get it, won't they get it. lol.

And that really means a lot that they all feel different. Cause I know some could be connected or in the same verse if necessary, but I really do write every piece in it's own verse unless specified, so the fact they do come across feeling different makes me feel like I'm doing something right. And that's always a plus. :D

[paitho]

This story is something very special.
Very well written.
It's so different to other vampire-stories and I really love it.
You have created an unique kind of vampire and I would love to read more of this story.
So I wonder if you will ever continue writing here and hopefully finish the story as well.