Lost Poem

[feminineenigma]

i sit perched precariously

Comments

[lynk1up]

You have some very interesting rhythmic effects going on here. In particular, your two lines,
"like a suicide jumper
on the bleakest day in november"
really play off each other well as far as the way they sound in the head.

There are other parts that show that your concept for sound and sylable is pretty keen. :)

[feminineenigma]

thanks chris. :) you're the best.

[kathockey19]

i really like it...its kinda explains how im feeling right now, waiting for a phone call that i know wont come...