Let's go boar hunting!

[femme_f]

Title: Hunters
Pairing: Sawyer/Desmond
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I don’t own them
Author's notes: English is not my first language.
Summary: Boar hunting was what Sawyer said, but he meant something else...
Dedication: For Faith again :P not that I mind writing this ;)

Comments

[zealmightyspork]

You own so badly! That was really awesome. And this is supposed to be a quickie! *fans self*

"Fuck me brotha!"
I seriously had to bite my finger to keep myself from giggling my ass off, which wouldn't be a good idea since my mother is sleeping in the room above me :p

I owe you, I really do :p

[femme_f]

I wasn't sure about it, since it really was a quickie, but I'm glad you like it then!

I just need to do something with 'brotha' and I can so imagine Des saying that, it's terrible ;)

And I like writing, so you owe me nothing but a gate scene :P

*fans self*

[inthewild62]

Wow Jill! *speechless*

Desmond/Sawyer is officially my new favourite slash ship. (except New Jate of course ;) ) You write it so well!

[[ ”Fuck me brotha!” he moans. ]]

Lol - I love that he says Brotha even during sex. I can actually hear them the way you write them, especially Desmond. Great job!

- Carla

Re: *fans self*

[femme_f]

Ah, thank you so much! Really appreciate your comment!

Good thing that you said except New Jate :P

xx

[night_sky_dream]

I love Dessy and Sawyer <3 So much hotness!!

"They return to camp without a boar, yet they’re not unsatisfied at all."

LOL the last line was great!

xxx

[femme_f]

Hehe, thank you, I had to made the 'hunt' satisfying of course :P

xx

[alluresource]

lmfao this is amazing. seriously,

just a mixture of hands and dicks down there
that made me laugh

[femme_f]

Haha, thanks! :D

[a70eezchild]

That was insanely awesome...definitely a satisfying quickie!

Favorite 3 words...
"They just fuck"

Simple perfection!

[femme_f]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comment, very glad people read it and like it!