September When It Comes; Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants: Lena/Annik

Apr 04, 2006 17:29

Title: September When It Comes
Author: marginalia
Archive: .: marginalia :.
Fandom: Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants
Pairing: Lena/Annik. ish.
Rating: PG
Notes: Written for celeria in femslash06. One of the wildcard requests: "The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants (Lena Kaligaris/Annik Marchand, or any of the foursome with someone not in the foursome)." Title & cut text ( Read more... )

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marginalia April 12 2006, 22:39:29 UTC
thank you! and thank you for listening to me flail about it :)

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thepastperfect April 5 2006, 03:24:44 UTC
OH. MY GOD. Thank you thank you thank you!

I really didn't expect anyone to pick this one up, and I'm delighted that you did. I love the way Lena changes and learns to be okay with changing, even though there's a part of me that is really sad at the way the Sisterhood changes along with time. Being together wouldn't be the norm anymore; it would be the exception. - that made me sniffle. There's a part of me that's very nervous about the fourth book because of it.

There are so many other beautiful things - Lena drawing their conversations (since I'm bad at drawing, I can only imagine what that must look like) and Carmen's reaction and the sideline descriptions of George and Ari. And I really liked this line: She thought of how different this Lena was from the one so many summers ago in Greece, hiding behind her sketch pad and her language.

Lovely. Thank you so much.

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marginalia April 12 2006, 22:49:57 UTC
thank you so much! it was a tricky prompt to tackle just because i felt like i 'knew' lena least of the four. it was awesome figuring her out. i'm so glad it worked for you :)

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dacro April 5 2006, 03:45:22 UTC
I have no idea of this fandom at all, but this read so easy and comfortable - like a warm quilt and a cup of tea.

She fell silent, and they listened to each other breathe for a while.
Really cool image. I loved that whole stretching/talking/breathing part.

*loves*

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marginalia April 12 2006, 22:52:26 UTC
aw, thank you!

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dacro April 13 2006, 03:04:23 UTC
*loves*

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starfishchick April 5 2006, 17:17:40 UTC
"Telling about him was once such a huge thing, but now. Now it's not the big story of my heart, you know? I'm not the girl he loved anymore. I'm not the girl who loved him."

This is lovely. Good job!!

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marginalia April 12 2006, 22:52:33 UTC
thank you!

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marginalia April 12 2006, 22:52:45 UTC
thank you very much!

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