the house set fire to my heart (Whip It, Bliss/Pash, R)

Sep 03, 2010 11:14

Title: the house set fire to my heart
Author: aphrodite_mine
Recipient: librelivre, who, based on her requests, is totally awesome ( Read more... )

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jouissant September 3 2010, 17:52:30 UTC
Oh, this is PERFECT. Wonderful job.

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livrelibre September 3 2010, 23:25:06 UTC
YOU are AWESOME! This is absolutely pitch perfect and just what I wanted--all the heart, humor, heat, toughness and caring of sweet sweet Bliss/Pash:) The ending-<3s! I really like that this is Psh's POV; you do her voice, inner and outer, well (Rainbow-Loving Jesus made me crack up). And you captured the derby atmosphere (Candy Strippers! Team, bruises, even the assholes:) Thank you so much!

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leksa September 4 2010, 05:27:02 UTC
I liked this, especially the lovely ending!

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alostcorner September 6 2010, 01:24:28 UTC
This is so sweet. I love their more-than-friends/not-quite-girlfriends vibe, and I love seeing the derby world from Pash's viewpoint.

And oh, this made me do a little flail irl, so adorable:
you’ll never tell Bliss about this because she’ll either laugh in your face or give you that look... the one she gave you when you knew that she would like White Hot Passion Tea better than regular Green Tea

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