Comments | femslash10: Fic: On Hold, Mandatory Evacuation (Criminal Minds, Emily/JJ)

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Fic: On Hold, Mandatory Evacuation (Criminal Minds, Emily/JJ)

Sep 09, 2010 14:10

Title: On Hold, Mandatory Evacuation
Author: speshtian
Recipient: urban_folk_girl
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1105
Disclaimer(s): I don't own Criminal Minds, etc.
Comments: Written as a pinch-hit for urban_folk_girl. I wasn't sure of what you particularly like or dislike, so I guess this is just my brand of angst. Huge thanks to abrandnewboom for the beta.

( Emily goes home to D.C., to an empty apartment and no messages on the answering machine. )

Comments 4

shadowings September 9 2010, 20:26:23 UTC

aw. i like the blink of an eye circular style in which this is written.

urban_folk_girl September 10 2010, 13:43:11 UTC

Oh, this was lovely and perfect and exactly what I wanted! Emily is my FAV character on the show, and your writing style has captured her so well - strong, subtle, vulnerable, wanting. This is so understated and visceral, and everything you've held back makes it explode with emotion. Thank you thank you thank you! I love it!

hivesix September 11 2010, 06:23:51 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! Emily is my fav as well so it's always fun to explore her character. I'm glad you like it!

hivesix September 11 2010, 06:22:54 UTC

Thanks!