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All That Glitters - Dante/Lust - R

Jul 05, 2006 14:37

Title: All That Glitters
Author: theladyfeylene
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Dante/Lust
Rating: R
Prompt: Shiny
Word Count: 1048
Spoilers: Full Series Spoilers
Summary: Glass often shined more brightly than diamond - glass was worth less and needed its glitter to catch the eye.

( All That Glitters )

Comments 8

momoiro_usagi July 5 2006, 23:19:01 UTC

If only I could've written that...oh, you make me jealous, Fey! XD But it's a good kind of jealous, so it's OK! ;)

I loved every word! The parallel between the fake necklace and Lust's fake beauty was such a good idea! ^^ Nice, nice job!

theladyfeylene July 5 2006, 23:22:45 UTC

I intended to write Dante/Rose, too! I don't know where this came from!

Thank you! It just sort of happened, and I didn't even make the connection myself until right up at the very end, and then it just seemed to click!

momoiro_usagi July 5 2006, 23:28:08 UTC

I love it when things work out that way!

Oooh, DantexRose! ^_______^ Hopefully you find some inspiration for that one soon!

redrose999 July 5 2006, 23:40:41 UTC

This was really good. I love Dante, she drips selfish evil with every word. The pendent and how she uses it to decorate Lust very much like a child would a doll was dark, and very seductive.

Very very well done, I do love your Dante, she chillingly evil!

theladyfeylene July 6 2006, 05:24:04 UTC

Thank you! She is so evil and selfish. She gives me the creeps! :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed!

train_diskense July 6 2006, 01:18:03 UTC

As always, you are amazing. I love you and your stories. Yuri espesically ^-^;;; *huggles and purrs*

theladyfeylene July 6 2006, 05:24:14 UTC

*blushes* Thank you, very much.

_acerbitas_ July 6 2006, 05:48:35 UTC

Woah, OMG, I'm totally in love with all your stories now. ;__; They are just so awesome! :) This one...wow...I loved the symbolism. Sweet.