A Game of Queens and Princes - Dante/Rose - NC-17

[theladyfeylene]

Title: A Game of Queens and Princes
Author: theladyfeylene
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Dante/Rose, Envy/Rose
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: Family
Word Count: 1018
Spoilers: Full Series Spoilers
Warnings: Non-con
Summary: Dante was willing to allow Envy certain privileges, but lately he had been pushing his boundaries...

Comments

[anat_astarte]

WOW.....using the baby teeth was a very creative idea........great fic!!

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! I've had that idea - Dante having Envy's baby teeth - kicking around in my head for a while. I thought it was too good not to use!

[redrose999]

Ohhh I adore your Dante, she is wicked. Heh, nice touch with the baby teeth, and I love how she comes to Rose's rescue!

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you so much! Heee, i've been wanting to use the baby teeth thing for a while!

[momoiro_usagi]

Wow! O____O That was brilliant! I've always wondered how Envy would react when he realized Dante wanted Rose so she could get Ed...I know that Envy certainly wouldn't have wanted him as his new stepdad! I love the way you write Envy, and having him turn into a soldier to terrorize her fit so well! Nice job!

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! yeah, I don't think Envy would be at all thrilled with that idea. And he is a jealous, jealous creature. He's such a brat! Thank you! I really liked that idea, and it seemed like what Envy would do.

[_acerbitas_]

Oh my god! *___* That was so awesome...and it was such an original idea. Dante is such a smart one. You're storytelling and writing skills never cease to amaze me. Lovely work! *_____*

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*reads it again*

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed! Dante is scarily smart! Aw, thank you!