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Erotic Nightmares - 014 - Dante/Lust

Jul 16, 2006 01:09

Title: Erotic Nightmares
Author: theladyfeylene
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Dante/Lust
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 014, nightmares
Word Count: 619
Spoilers: Full series
Warnings: Violent and disturbing content
Summary: Lust haunts Dante in her dreams...

( Erotic Nightmares )

Comments 9

momoiro_usagi July 16 2006, 20:37:20 UTC

Wow! O.O Your descriptions here are absolutely stunning, and it's so nice to see Lust getting her revenge for once, even if only in Dante's nightmares! ;) I love how you show that Lust affects Dante more than she'd ever admit! Nice job on everything!

theladyfeylene July 16 2006, 20:47:13 UTC

Thank you! I will confess, I wrote this the other night when I was completely drugged out of my mind. I didn't even remember writing it.

momoiro_usagi July 16 2006, 21:35:12 UTC

Ha ha, well, some of the best works of literature were written on drugs! ^_^ You did a great job!

theladyfeylene July 16 2006, 21:39:08 UTC

This is very true! I try not to write when I'm out of it, but sometimes Common Sense takes a vacation!

train_diskense July 16 2006, 20:39:44 UTC

Wow. As always, lovely. *rereads*

theladyfeylene July 16 2006, 20:47:26 UTC

Thank you, very much!

yaminokurisu July 16 2006, 20:42:48 UTC

H-holy crap. That was painfully good.

theladyfeylene July 16 2006, 20:47:46 UTC

Thank you! It was definitely different than what I usually write!

elwhyenen July 17 2006, 00:59:13 UTC

Ow, the visuals hurt in a very good way.

Nicely written and all but...but gawd, OW. XD;