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urban_folk_girl in femslashheaven

Fic: Slavery to a Pattern (6/7)

Jul 27, 2010 17:52

Title: SLAVERY TO A PATTERN
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Quinn/Rachel, Brittany/Santana
Rating: Up to R
Spoilers: All of season 1
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Author's Note: Written for Glee Angst Meme, specifically the Angst section of the Rachel/Quinn Prompt Meme for the following prompt: "Rachel/Quinn - one or both of Quinn's parents are ( Read more... )

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urban_folk_girl July 27 2010, 22:21:22 UTC

You beat me to the punch! lol. I just posted the last section. It took me a moment b/c of the unexpected chapter breaks and having to reformat and repost. Blerg. Thanks for commenting, and check for the final part now - it just went live!

2halves1heart July 28 2010, 09:05:20 UTC

This was pure brilliance. It addressed almost any issue I had with characters in the real show (mainly the scene with Judy and Quinn after the Regionals performance) and well, the plot built and grew organically and... I don't even know, my brain ceased to exist after reading this. Thank you for this snippet of brain cells woven into words!

winstonta March 14 2011, 01:11:12 UTC

I'm a bit confused with the timeline; in the last chapter you mentioned both regionals and sectionals, but in this one you have only mentioned regionals. Does that mean that Quinn is getting ready to have the baby?

Other than my slight confusion there I am continuing to enjoy this series and will be sad to see it end. And now I'm onto the next part :)

urban_folk_girl March 14 2011, 01:27:29 UTC

How COMPLETELY delightful it has been to get your real time comments to this piece, and what lovely comments they are. I'll go back and speak more specifically to the others at their pages, but I did want to note the timeline. I deliberately left it ambiguous with regard to Quinn having or not having the baby - that was secondary to me to the real story of what happens to your sense of personhood in abusive family systems, and that impact of loving and being loved. I said in a comment somewhere, I love hurt/comfort fic, and I think that's part of why. Anyway, I'm comfortable with my reader's projection of what happens with the baby. Re: timelines, it's five months from the start of the story to the end. Thanks thanks thanks for reading, and for being so attentive with your comments! <3

winstonta March 14 2011, 03:18:05 UTC

No thanks needed for the reviewing. I only wish I could have sat down and read it straight through, but I already was behind schedule on writing my weekly term paper. But hey, I still got both finished/accomplished, right? :)