Fic: Slavery to a Pattern (7/7): COMPLETED STORY

Jul 27, 2010 18:15

Title: SLAVERY TO A PATTERN
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Quinn/Rachel, Brittany/Santana
Rating: Up to R
Spoilers: All of season 1
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Author's Note:  Written for Glee Angst Meme, specifically the Angst section of the Rachel/Quinn Prompt Meme for the following prompt: "Rachel/Quinn - one or both of Quinn's parents are ( Read more... )

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urban_folk_girl July 27 2010, 22:36:35 UTC
Goodness, you blew through that! Speedy reader - I'm impressed. I hope your appetite for an epilogue means you liked the last chapter, lol. It will be a few days before I post the epilogue, which is really just sort of a cut scene, or a floating segment I wasn't sure where to put anywhere else. I'll have it up by the weekend though, for sure. In the meantime, thanks thanks thanks for sticking with this, and for reading and commenting. It's so encouraging!

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urban_folk_girl July 30 2010, 03:09:25 UTC
Oh, yay, relief! lol. I had worried that with all the action of the early chapters the final ones would seem flat. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for your very lovely compliments on my writing. Thank you always for taking the time to comment every step of the way - I get all warm and fuzzy every time! <3

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urban_folk_girl July 30 2010, 03:11:45 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I have so appreciated the honesty and rawness of your comments, and your perspective. I know you've been right there on the angst meme too, and I have loved so many of your stories (especially I Have Named You Queen), so your comments have been especially flattering to me. I'm glad you like this Quinn, too! She *is* snuggly. Thanks for sticking with me, and for taking the time to comment over and over!

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anonymous July 28 2010, 00:11:15 UTC
This. Was amazing. Seriously one of the best Faberry fics I've read. I like that it was darker, but not overly dark, and you fit it into canon nicely.

now a serious note.

You're in some serious need of a beta. I've found double sentences, and some typos, some grammatical errors... and I'd love to volunteer.

This was seriously beautiful.

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anonymous July 28 2010, 00:11:52 UTC
by the way, I'm apparently not logged in, so I'm faithlessfate :p

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urban_folk_girl July 28 2010, 00:19:13 UTC
Thanks! I so appreciate that you're reading and commenting and your lovely lovely comments. I'm always thrilled to hear that people enjoy my fics.

Re: beta, blerg! Thanks. I honestly don't know WHAT I've ended up with here, lol. I had to cut and recut and edit and re-edit because I got LJ blocked THREE TIMES trying to post this. I was working off segments here and segements there and cutting and pasting all over so by the time I actually got it up I was so annoyed and confused that I couldn't see straight. Please do beta me, and thanks for volunteering!

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THE BEST!! ayden07 July 28 2010, 00:18:30 UTC
WOW, this has to be the best story that i have ever read!! I am crying right now. I am so happy that Rachel saved Quinn and they ended up together. Quinn got a family who loves her unconditionally. It makes me wish that love like that could happen in the real world; that everyone could end up with the person who saved them. It makes me wish I could end up with the person who saved me and who I love. Thank you for this story. its amazing!!

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Re: THE BEST!! urban_folk_girl July 30 2010, 03:13:46 UTC
Whoa, I'm SO flattered to hear you say that... thank you! I'm really happy to hear it was a good read for you, and especially that it made you feel things deeply in response. That's so gratifying as a writer. The process of creating that unconditional loving environment was deeply satisfying for me, and I love that you just *get it*. Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment!

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urban_folk_girl July 30 2010, 03:16:13 UTC
Thank you so so much for your lovely compliments to my writing, and especially for commenting on the last chapters. I mentioned upthread that the beginning of this story was so full of action that I worried the later chapters would seem flat or disappointing, so I'm glad the arc was there, it came across. Thanks also for commenting on Rachel's dads - you're exactly right in terms of what I was trying to bring out about the contrast, and they were such a joy to write - probably my fav part of this fic besides Quinn. Thanks thanks thanks for reading, and for taking the time to comment - it has really meant a lot!

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