The Land Of The Not Right

[feralcatgoddess]

I wrote a new story... and actually finished it, sorta, I may do a fallow up.  Heres the story!  tell me what you think, please?  **begs**

-The Land Of The Not Right-

Lightning lit up the sky and thunder shook my bed as I rolled over and stuffed my head under my pillow. The latest storm had been raging for the last hour and I had been woken up at

Comments

[freshxd]

i always say "standby" to that state of almost-sleep. its so weird.
anyways, this story has something very interesting about i, something... hm... real.
okay, not that i see furry weird animals at night, but the way you described the feeling of something has changed in the room and the feeling of dozing of and all that, it just has so much reality to it, very good.
there run a chll down my spine Oo
okay, okay, im still not that much of a fantasy fan but i liked this story, really :)
very good!