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bronson August 7 2010, 03:52:56 UTC
FIRST BITCHES. I GOT DIS.

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fermine August 7 2010, 03:53:32 UTC
I LOL'ED IRL.

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bronson August 7 2010, 03:53:59 UTC
Okay so what I really love about this fic is that it's domestic and angsty and established all at the same time. Like, these are normal scenes in their relationship, weaved in with canon and the consequences of what happened in the film and all that.

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fermine August 7 2010, 04:02:34 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. Really, I was a bit worried because it had no sense of order last night and I was just about to give up halfway but then I remembered you had Robert/Saito fic and that, if I finished this, you might actually finish your fill too. Lol. JK. Seriously. I'm super relieved, man. :)

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bronson August 7 2010, 03:54:34 UTC
AND DAMN RIGHT, ARTHUR IS FOR EAMES, NOT FOR COBB.

(BUT EAMES MAY ALSO BE FOR COBB. CAUSE HE'S FOR EVERYONE. MKAY.)

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fermine August 7 2010, 03:56:33 UTC
LOL. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD.

( I JUST LMAO'ED IRL AGAIN, SORRY. YOU MAKE EAMES SOUND LIKE A SLUT. )

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godofwine August 7 2010, 04:31:46 UTC
YOU MAKE EAMES SOUND LIKE A SLUT.
Eames is totally a slut. But only for Arthur. But no one else knows this, so.

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godofwine August 7 2010, 04:35:12 UTC
BRB JUST GOING TO GO UNBREAK MY HEART, YOU KNOW.

Also, I really like the time shifts and the way the little details are interwoven throughout the story. It really creates a sense of them as people.

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fermine August 7 2010, 13:42:05 UTC
BUT BUT THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE A HAPPY SCHMOOPY FIC D:

I'm glad you like the ~time shifts~ I was a bit inspired by 500 Days or else just lazy to have this all make sense. D: Thank you for reading!

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pumpkin_bread August 7 2010, 04:52:14 UTC
Ace. Love domestic/domestic-trouble fic. The writing was so pretty.

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fermine August 7 2010, 13:42:34 UTC
Thank you!

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