I Must be Crazy

Feb 17, 2008 11:02

Title: I must Be Crazy
Author: ferr89
Ratings & Warnings: NC-17 for sex
Word Count: 2,888
Summary: A different version of Colonial Day.
Author’s Notes: Written for dramaturgca who asked for Fluffy happy pre-Scar pilots with sex and banter. This is my first venture into BSG fic, so I hope I did alright. Kudos to my beta Mary, who removed 150 adjectives and comma’s ( Read more... )

bsg fic, klficathon

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gibgirl04 February 17 2008, 17:34:17 UTC
This rocked, thanks for sharing

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ferr89 February 17 2008, 21:52:30 UTC
Thank you! I tweaked and twisted and re-wrote this a few times, so I'm glad you liked the final outcome. :) Thanks for reading.

Jenn

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pinkhusky February 17 2008, 21:43:31 UTC
Very nice :] Perfect voice on both of them, very hot XD

It was even better because I listened to Passacaglia while reading. Heheheh.

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ferr89 February 17 2008, 21:55:10 UTC
Thanks!! The little voices in their heads actually had a lot more to say, but the story started toget away from me, so I had to shorten their appearances.

I'm glad you enjoyed. Writing the sex part made me a little nervous, so I'm glad you found it hot.;) LOL

Jenn

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ruthkit February 17 2008, 22:54:51 UTC
awesome and hawt, wish that did happen between them in that eppy

(newbieUK)

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ferr89 February 18 2008, 00:05:25 UTC
Thanks Newbie. I wish it went something like that too. ;){{hugs}}

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cherylad February 18 2008, 00:23:40 UTC
Wow Jenn! Great job. I so love your version of CG over the one we got!!

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ferr89 February 18 2008, 01:18:20 UTC
Thanks Cheryl. I'm glad you liked!! {{hugs}}

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cherylad February 18 2008, 02:14:13 UTC
I did!! I did!!

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queenofspin February 18 2008, 00:58:00 UTC
Wow! That was great. Thanks for sharing. It was funny and hot--best combination. I loved the head voices! Please feel free to venture again. That was awesome!

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ferr89 February 18 2008, 01:23:27 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad the combination worked for you. Would have liked to put more funnies in, but was a bit nervous. Next time I'll get more in there. I hope to venture in again soon. ;)

Thanks again!

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