Comments | ferrynheit: More PB crap

ferrynheit

More PB crap

Nov 23, 2007 03:20

PB people: I finally finished the sequel to my old Sucre/LJ fic. Remember that thing? Such a strange pairing. In fact, such a strange idea. Sleepwalking? But yeah, here's the (ungodly long) sequel: Dirtier Little Secret. Chapter one is linked there, if you hadn't seen it yet or wanted a refresher ( Read more... )

sucre/lj, prison break, sequel, fanfiction

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thelana November 23 2007, 12:06:23 UTC

Wow, 8000 words! That's amazing!

ferrynheit November 23 2007, 18:53:38 UTC

No, that's insanity!

thelana November 24 2007, 01:21:23 UTC

No, it's awesome :)

Will you be signing up for halfshellvenus' fic exchange again? I wonder if this time I'll be better at guessing your style :D

ferrynheit November 24 2007, 08:15:39 UTC

I don't know yet. When is the next fic exchange? I haven't heard a thing about it.

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Ferryn, you rock. goshdarnheck November 24 2007, 08:28:55 UTC

So "Dirtier Little Secret" was the one you started long time ago? Wow. I just finished reading both your Sucre/LJ fics. The length of them both. *bows to master* My patience would have worn off long before either of them got to those lengths.

I loved both fics, mainly because you didn't let Sucre jump into bed with LJ right away. There was agonizing angst and doubt and 'maybe-I-could, no-I-shouldn't' flip-flopping while Sucre dealt with his feelings and LJ being all pitiful and begging. Also, you wrote tons of detail and imagery, which was fantastic.

Moments I loved:

“Well, I couldn’t help but wonder… did you enjoy it?” He stole a glance at Sucre ( ... )

Re: Ferryn, you rock. ferrynheit November 24 2007, 12:10:12 UTC

Wow, you read all that? You're awesome for taking the time and then commenting!

I love how we're so opposite. You're great at the shorter stuff and drabbles (and I envy you for it), while I can't seem to write a short fic to save my life. I get hung up on details. I find myself obsessed with explaining exactly what everyone is doing at every moment. I guess I just get a certain picture in my head and then I want to be sure everyone sees it the way I'm seeing it, even though I know that's not what good writing is all about. The nice thing about books is being able to imagine things however you want. I believe that, and yet when I'm the writer instead of the reader, I don't quite follow that rule of thumb.

Riiight. You got a boner because you miss Maricruz. Glad you could keep telling yourself that. :P

:D He needs his justifications, no matter how irrational. Poor unintelligent Sucre.

Of course Michael knows. Someone's sniffing around his Sucre.Haha, I love it. I love how you, me, and Ab all have this (whether real or joking) ( ... )

Re: Ferryn, you rock. thelana November 24 2007, 12:27:38 UTC

According to various internet sites:

Believe it or not, anal sex can be very pleasurable for women because the rectum shares a wall with the vagina, and the sexual nerves are actually closer on that side, which makes the sensation unique, stronger and quite possibly orgasmic. source

Ironically, in a lot of gay erotica by written by actual gays, when they write the first anal sex there is often a moment when it, well, won't go in and the, err, active partner tells the receptive one to just relax and push down on it "like if you were taking a shit". Yeah, not particularly romantic, but a staple of male written gay porn.

Re: Ferryn, you rock. ferrynheit November 24 2007, 13:07:16 UTC

Very interesting. I had never heard that. Didn't realize anal sex could be so pleasurable for a woman. Still doesn't make me want to try it, but interesting to know.

As for the male written gay porn, I suppose they'd know a lot better than me or any other woman. That's the funny thing about slash, it's so often written by females. We're all just guessing and writing what we want to see. I can't imagine what any of my gay friends would think if they read my fics. I'm sure they'd laugh at the sheer absurdity of them.

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