It was really nice, I really, really like the way you write, it's not rushed, everything is smooth, clear and seems real. Gerard's reaction to Frank, seeing the photo was kinda odd! I hope it's only because he left and other stuff around it, not because something bad happened to Mikey. And also that he'll explain it to Frank, soon :) The game was a really sweet idea, but I hope they'll soon start talking to each other about themselves. And not only because I'm curious about Gee's past! :D I'm glad the game made Gerard smile again! And three cheers for letter-battle! <3
Really nice job! But well, I didn't like one thing... The length! Come on, 4th chapter has to be longer! :D
Ahh thank you! That really means a lot to me. I always worry that my dialogue sounds kind of stiff and unrealistic, so that's really reassuring to hear. The scrabble thing was something I wanted to do as soon as I got the prompt. Basically I was like "Let's stick Frank and Gerard in a cabin together and make them play board games by a roaring fire and it'll be super cute YEAH! \o/" So I'm glad it turned out well :) And then Mikey. All will be revealed eventually :D Sigh yes, I know it was short. You are fully entitled to yell at me about that, haha, I'm terrible about posting adequate amounts of writing on time. I'm going to a camp this weekend so I won't be able to write, but I have monday off so my plan is to work on part 4 then. Wow so this was really long and rambling. But yeah. Thanks for commenting, I love getting feedback. :)
Hi! Yes okay I'm currently working on part 4 and since I have nothing going on this weekend as of yet (yesss) I plan on finishing it then. Thank you ever so much for being patient with me, I really appreciate it :) and don't really deserve it as I am being terrible about updating this, haha I mean really I can't say no to the puppy eyes
Oh, I'm glad to hear that! I'm looking forward to it :)
You really don't have to thank me, when you wait for fics like I do, you somehow get accustomed :D But yeah, I really like this one, so I wanted to make sure you'll update ;)
You really can't. Haha, now I'm going to use puppy eyes all the time!
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It was really nice, I really, really like the way you write, it's not rushed, everything is smooth, clear and seems real.
Gerard's reaction to Frank, seeing the photo was kinda odd! I hope it's only because he left and other stuff around it, not because something bad happened to Mikey. And also that he'll explain it to Frank, soon :)
The game was a really sweet idea, but I hope they'll soon start talking to each other about themselves. And not only because I'm curious about Gee's past! :D
I'm glad the game made Gerard smile again! And three cheers for letter-battle! <3
Really nice job! But well, I didn't like one thing...
The length! Come on, 4th chapter has to be longer! :D
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The scrabble thing was something I wanted to do as soon as I got the prompt. Basically I was like "Let's stick Frank and Gerard in a cabin together and make them play board games by a roaring fire and it'll be super cute YEAH! \o/" So I'm glad it turned out well :)
And then Mikey. All will be revealed eventually :D
Sigh yes, I know it was short. You are fully entitled to yell at me about that, haha, I'm terrible about posting adequate amounts of writing on time. I'm going to a camp this weekend so I won't be able to write, but I have monday off so my plan is to work on part 4 then.
Wow so this was really long and rambling. But yeah. Thanks for commenting, I love getting feedback. :)
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I mean really I can't say no to the puppy eyes
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You really don't have to thank me, when you wait for fics like I do, you somehow get accustomed :D But yeah, I really like this one, so I wanted to make sure you'll update ;)
You really can't. Haha, now I'm going to use puppy eyes all the time!
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