yesterday you were here with me

Jun 28, 2013 12:20



it's not right. niall knows it isn't. he knows he's committing just as bad a moral crime as zayn is, or maybe even worse, since apparently he's the selfish slut who's ripping zayn away from his girlfriend here. but the thing is, niall doesn't do these things on purpose. he doesn't do it to hurt perrie, or to tear them apart, or for any reason ( Read more... )

pairing: zayn and niall, ziall, fandom: one direction, wey hey what am i doing

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blueasyoureyes March 4 2013, 23:52:37 UTC
oh, wow. wow wow wow.

i think this is my favourite ziall you've written.

i feel like i say this all the time but you write them so well. so realistic and no holding back and it was heartbreaking as well as good to get niall's pov on their relationship.

i loved literally every line but this is one of my favourites: or any reason other than experiencing the glow of zayn fucking malik loving him back. OH and this one too: and niall doesn't say that he can't just stop from falling in love with zayn malik, goddamit.

I JUST LOVE THIS A LOT AND I LOVE ALL YOUR WRITING AND I JUST WANT TO HUG NIALL AND MAKE HIM BETTER

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fetusziall March 5 2013, 08:41:28 UTC
your comments are my favorite, i'm so glad you like my characterizations because i've never been good at niall's pov so this means a lot to me ♥ thank you sacha!

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sburet84 March 5 2013, 03:31:51 UTC
ziallllllllllllllllllllllll. love this pairing :)

*samantha*

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fetusziall March 5 2013, 08:42:01 UTC
i love them too :) thank you for reading!

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oc_gone March 6 2013, 17:28:52 UTC
Infidelity is one of my favorite themes in fiction, and I think you've just created one of the best ones for the 1D fandom and just my luck that this is ziall. This was so heart wrenching, and it made me pensive about my own experiences with the topic. I just felt Niall's weariness and willingness to fall into oblivion.

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fetusziall March 6 2013, 19:27:41 UTC
it's my favorite too, i think of it as a guilty pleasure because there are such few ziall infidelity fics out there. i'm glad i made you feel for niall, he's such a moody little shit sometimes <3 thanks for reading!

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nandosziall March 6 2013, 23:19:41 UTC
this was amazing. honestly, you capture zayn and niall so perfectly I can't even describe it (bless you)

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fetusziall March 7 2013, 08:51:25 UTC
thank you! ♥

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irishgal_19 March 7 2013, 00:27:18 UTC
why are you such an amazing author 0_o

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fetusziall March 7 2013, 08:52:49 UTC
because i invest too much of my time doing unproductive things, like writing this fic :) but thank you, i love you ♥

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