Critique Post

[fewterer]

Critique post, here we go~

Just keep in mind:

• Just don't post negatives if you aren't willing to give advice
• Comments are screened :]
• Don't worry, I'm not going to hunt you down because you don't like the way I RP him.
• Don't drama mama this post, please :x

 

Comments

[anonymous]

[fewterer]

Haine is so hard. For over a year I could not write him. He's really a you have it or you don't character. I think as time goes on, I'll be more comfortable and get better...and I think for now I'm at least decent. Yeah, I agree. I've seen so many bad Haines so I've been afraid to play him at all. Thank you so much I am telling me I am doing it right. I'm really toying with his voice right now.

I also think the setting is interesting, especially since Haine isn't sure about the past that haunts him so. It was very helpful, thank you!

[anonymous]

[fewterer]

I'm sure he saw after, and if he needs to be question, I'll totally have him up for that. He doesn't know much about his boss, but he can vouch for the creep factor. So most likely when Stoneface and Bastet are there, he's still grumpy and trying to sell his meat.

Sorry for creating an issue, but srsly if you guys have an issue like "we need Zombie not to be here/be here" just comment here so I can make a note of it. Sorry for causing any problems!

[smokesordie]

One question, actually. And I'm not sure if Susan talked to you already, but can Eyepatch hire Castor at the butcher's, or would you rather Zombie intervene, or something else/etc.? ( Context, if needed)

[fewterer]

She told me a bit about it, and it seems totally fine with me.