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emilykin in ff_friday

Fic: Comfort (Jayne)

Apr 08, 2009 23:41

Title: Comfort

Fandom: Firefly
Characters: Jayne,
Prompt: #036 No Dialogue
Word Count: 518
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jayne goes whorin’ and finds some comfort.
Note: This is my first time posting here. Please tell me if I did something wrong and I will do my best to correct it.

( Comfort )

036 (no dialogue)

Comments 5

budclare April 9 2009, 13:54:49 UTC

That's sweet. :)

bookaddict43 April 10 2009, 05:46:58 UTC

I like that the girl signed the note with her full name and that it meant a lot to Jayne. It's an interesting slice of life you've given us here.

mercsgoodgirl April 10 2009, 12:08:50 UTC

What a lovely, sensual little work! You've drawn the reader into your world and I can readily see why Jayne might find such a place remarkable among the hardness of the Rim.

I always felt I was living on the wrong rock, and now I got an idea where I oughta be. Can you wave me the co-ords? 'Cause that's the kind of ministerin' I'd like to be doin'.

One tiny thing -- it's 'tow' as in raw flax, not 'toe' as in what's on your feet. ;)

More, please!

emilykin April 13 2009, 02:11:26 UTC

Thank you. A big thanks for the correction. I'd hate to accidentally bring about imagery of a head with a big nail growing out of the back.
I'm still testing the waters in the 'verse, but I'm sure there are more fics to come.

theneis July 26 2010, 07:42:59 UTC

I really like this. You gave us a new perspective on Jayne. Great!