My FF story submission

[sushulana]

A mournful silence pressed down over the abbey on Persephone. Not normally given to much talk, the Brotherhood was even less inclined to chatter now.

Word had reached them of the passing of Shepard Booke.

Brother Michael was an exception to the rule of quietude, and after three days of whispers and significant looks, he could no longer

Comments

[budclare]

Please include which challenge you're writing for in your post; it makes it easier for me to tag entries.

Also, stories longer than a few hundred words should be cut-tagged. Here are directions for cut-tagging entries. (Click the little blue pencil icon near the top of your post to edit.)

Still more also, you misspelled Shepherd Book. :(

(Don't feel bad. I don't think we've yet had a poster who was new to LJ who didn't mess up the posting. Hell, I messed up my first post a smidge, and I wasn't even new to LJ. It's sad how long it took me to find out about the blue pencil.)

TY!

[sushulana]

I found the directions... but the little blue pencil?

I can't see that icon, anywhere.

I didn't think the challenges were still going on here, I just wanted to post something and get some comments back on it.