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Gift for Perkyandproud

Dec 25, 2009 01:31

Recipient: perkyandproud
Writer: chaosravenTitle: The Sorceresses Knight (aka Throbbing Wangs and Bosoms ( Read more... )

character: zell, series: final fantasy viii, character: seifer

Comments 8

perkyandproud December 25 2009, 08:21:36 UTC

Okay! :-) I wasn't sure where you were going at first, but I sat back, enjoyed the ride...and loved the destination!

Zell is precocious! Loved him propositioning Seifer :-) And Siefer's rather bemused acceptance :-) LOL! And the kissing at the end is so very sweet and romantic!

Thank you, thank you! Loved the story!

*hugs and more thanks*

chaosraven December 25 2009, 08:31:35 UTC

Uh, yeah, I almost feel like I should apologize because what started this fic was me basically going: you know what would be hilarious? Zell as a fratboy jackass type. And then running with it despite good advice from other people. >D

But I'm glad you liked it! And that you noticed the bits of romance I squished in. I tend to write unconventional romance so I'm happy that worked for you.

perkyandproud December 25 2009, 09:18:45 UTC

Eh, as a starting thought it beats all to heck "Zell is a whiny effeminate emo child who can't get laid if he paid," which makes me grind my teeth! :-)

I thought Fratboy Zell was kind of cute in a...well, an amoral fratboy kind of way. *grin*

And the romance is what really sold it for me :-) Unconventional rocks :-)

shindoxxshuichi December 26 2009, 21:48:45 UTC

YUMM ~~ how i love ffpress... wouldn't have found this if it wasn't posted there :O

erhm.

<3 zell and his whoremongering :P

chaosraven December 28 2009, 20:57:52 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

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chaosraven December 28 2009, 20:58:24 UTC

Thank you! The original prompt was "romance" so I needed to get it in there somehow. >D

nanirisfic December 30 2009, 02:59:34 UTC

This is certaintly different and original and yet still greatly in character. Love that you've made that book into a raunchy novel.

Love the twists of conversation and especially liked when Seifer picked up Zell and everything that followed after that.
This is made out of awesome sauce, so glad I saw it on ff_press

chaosraven December 30 2009, 03:19:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad they still came off as in character because I know I was taking some liberties along the way. >D The idea for The Sorceresses Knight to be a smutty novel came to me when I was trying to remember which Pupurun book is in the game and did a look up in the game script. It sounded perfect!

I'm hoping to expand the ending a little when I repost to AO3. >D I ran out of time to get the 'perfect ending'.