Life on Mars Anonymous Pornfest II - The Porn Bites Back

Jun 04, 2009 00:40

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Fic - Part 2 anonymous June 4 2009, 13:10:08 UTC
“Jesus Christ.”

“It’s not so bad. Really.” Sam was staring at Gene. Gene was staring at the bruises on Sam’s face, at the limp in his step, at his arm in the sling.

“I...”

“Don’t apologize,” Sam held up his good hand. “It’s what I asked for.”

“It ain’t right, Sam. We shouldn’t have gone so far.”

“I could have stopped you if I wanted to. I didn’t want you to. It’s okay.”

“I dislocated your bloody shoulder. How is that okay?” Gene struggled to keep his voice down amongst the passing doctors and nurses.

“Because I could feel it, Gene. And it felt so incredible.”

Gene stared at Sam’s unhinged grin with concern before his DI picked up his pace and hurried out of the hospital, certain that Sam would want that same treatment again, and terrified of what he’d do if Gene didn’t give it to him.

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Re: Fic - Part 2 anonymous June 4 2009, 15:20:28 UTC
My God, that was amazing. Ticked every box! Well done and Thank you, whoever you are!

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Re: Fic - Part 2 anonymous June 4 2009, 15:33:31 UTC
Wow, this has the potential to be a much longer fic, exploring the reasons behind Sam's dangerous neediness and how that plays against Gene's experience of noncon domestic violence. Does he love and care for Sam more in giving him what he craves or in refusing to hurt him? And whichever he chooses, how does that affect his own view of himself as fundamentally a decent man? This is very dark and intense! Well done.

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Re: Fic - Part 2 anonymous June 13 2009, 12:18:52 UTC
Oh, my, the sex was so hot and spot on, but this scenario could damage Gene far more than Sam. I agree, this has the potential for more, if you're up for it? *looks hopeful*

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Re: Fic - Part 2 anonymous June 13 2009, 23:57:11 UTC
I agree! I would love for you to write a longer piece to go with this. I can just see the angst ahead as their relationship continues and Sam wants more.

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