FIC: I would have stayed up with you all night (Patrick/Pete)

Feb 21, 2007 10:57

So. Imagine the boys are on Warped. Yes? Imagine there’s a crazy fan with a gun. Yes?
(or alternate explanation: I saw this prompt on we_are_cities and I thought "So, Fia, you haven’t written anything angsty in a while...")

I would have stayed up with you all night
(4799 words) // PG-13? I'm not sure... :/
For December 19th, 06.
warning for angst and ( Read more... )

pete/patrick, i would have stayed up with you all nigh, fic

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notyourfriend February 21 2007, 16:03:00 UTC
Wow, I don't know if it was my mood or what, but that got to me. I get so upset at the thought of any of the people I love dying and this just struck such a chord.

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fianna_fialena February 21 2007, 18:00:17 UTC
Awwwwy, I'm so sorry, didn't mean to make you cry! *hugs tight*

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becomingblurred February 21 2007, 16:29:38 UTC
Wow. I was just trying to find something to distract myself from my term paper, but this had me entirely entraced. I loved it. Great job.

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fianna_fialena February 21 2007, 19:48:12 UTC
Icon love! :D

I'm always happy if I can aide in academic procrastination! :D

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shadyperfection February 21 2007, 16:41:23 UTC
That was just too amazing for words. It made me cry, which is something I almost never do. (People think I'm heartless and cold because I don't cry at movies) I love the part with Patrick at the beginning, and how it cuts off to Pete's POV. It was just beautiful. The imagery, just everything.

I think my favorite part is the ending:

“I know,” Ryan replies, “because he fell out of a top bunk when he was a kid, did he ever tell you that?

That was a perfect ending.

Great song choice. I've written a story after listening to this song on repeat too.

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fianna_fialena February 21 2007, 19:50:05 UTC
Yessss, I love the ending! :D I was a bit scared it wouldn't be obvious that P33tard will be okay in the end, but it seems it is! :D Yay!

Thanks for your nice review! :D

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infamousxaffair February 21 2007, 18:12:46 UTC
I am in love with you&your AMAZING writting skills.

This story just made me cry a lot, but the ending was very
sweet. =]

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fianna_fialena February 21 2007, 19:50:42 UTC
awwww, thanks! :D ♥

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leighannenoelle February 21 2007, 20:33:23 UTC
OK I had to like hold myself back from letting out sobs while reading that story! Tears were pouring down my face! I've never reacted that way to a fic before! And relating it to that song too, whoa, too much (but in a good way)! You definitely know you've written a good story when you've moved everyone to tears, ha ha! Great job!

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fianna_fialena February 21 2007, 20:53:20 UTC
Hahahahah omg, your icon! XD XD

And thank you! :D ♥

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