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Dir en grey / Kaoru x Toshiya / Sympathy for the devil

Oct 19, 2009 22:04

Title: Sympathy for the devil
Author: bl4ckm4lice
Fandom: Dir en grey
Claim: Kaoru Niikura x Toshimasa Hara
Prompt: The Rolling Stones - Sympathy for the devil
Word Count: 1578
Rating: FRT
Warning: AU
Disclaimer: na-ah, not mine
Author's Notes: Made for fic_cd_mix challenge.
Link to table: here

( MondayTragedy )

Comments 4

pseudo_shigure October 19 2009, 15:27:15 UTC

Bagus idenya, Cit.
Tapi panjang ya... *org ber-attention span pendek*

bl4ckm4lice October 19 2009, 15:28:19 UTC

NAH. Coba ras, ini uda gw pangkas habis2an kan... Gimana kalo gw pake niat awal multi chapter...

cateris October 23 2009, 17:29:45 UTC

AU! AU! AU!!!!! ANGELS AND GOD AND THE DEVIL!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'M IN LOVE! I'M OUT OF MY MIND!!!! I LOVE THIS STUFF WITH ALL MY CRAZY SELF!!! It makes me think of Dante and the Divine Comedy and the greatness of these creatures that I find it simply sublime and larger than life!

He dropped to his knees, breathing hard. “…You watched everything, right?” He asked slowly.

This part here had a GREAT impact on me. The kind of impact only great tragedies can have. Oh, Kaoru...

The Devil shook his head, “My happiness means doom and destruction.”

“Those are your desire. Your happiness… lays with him.”

I love how you portrayed God all along the whole fic. How he's so wise and full of love and understanding and how he has answers for everything and manages to soften the Devil's heart :)

“…A human will die.” And that, was the inmost fear within the fearless Devil. Out in the open. Kaoru didn’t even know why he let that out. Silence hung in the hall.Again, this is such a strong part. Seeing the devil miserable, aware of the ( ... )

bl4ckm4lice October 24 2009, 01:57:48 UTC

I'm sooooo glad you enjoyed it :D ( ... )