FIC FOR SASHJUN

Mar 25, 2014 22:47

For: sashjun
From: azhe

Title: Jumping through Hoops
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru/Ueda
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Romance-y, implied fights, some bruises, plenty of confusion, stubborn men, and meddlesome members.
Notes: Dear sashjun , the story is reaallly long, but I hope you can still enjoy it!!! Story was mostly inspired by interviews, TV shows, photo shoots that ( Read more... )

year: 2014, p: nakamaru/ueda, ! fic, rated: pg-13

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sashjun March 26 2014, 00:34:10 UTC
Hello my lovely author! So Its 1:30 am where I am, and I realized that I really cant read this fic today because I work tomorrow fnkdfnlkvdlnvdv And just, I´m really excited about it because it´s a long MaRuda and i can´t wait to savor it properly. So tomorrow, I will be back! I just didn´t want to make you anxious. I saw the fic, I am super happy about the prospect, and the only reason I haven´t commented until now was because I had a very busy day and evening ♥ See you tomorrow then! Well technically today

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sashjun March 27 2014, 13:30:35 UTC
Hi! I'm sorry this took me longer than I estimated, but I am here now, and I loved it, so here is my fail and I hope it is not creepy 3

I love the Nakamame friendship, even if Kame turns out to be the evil spawn who plots complicated cupid scenarios. Still he is there and I love they talk even over the phone and such. And awww Nakamaru's unrequited love, it's just. Poor baby, he is so lost in it.

“Any chance he gets, he professes his love for mini-skirts, and long beautiful legs, which are attached to women, Kame, not men.”
bdsbfkjs Yes this Ueda and his love of legs. It must be so hard because Nakamaru, just, knows parts of his so well.

“If all else fails, I’d be willing to lend you a couple of miniskirts.”
hahahahah

Ueda, I would kill you if you gave such a scare to me. Though I do love that he calls Nakamaru for comfort ♥

“You know when you asked me to come over for entertainment,” Nakamaru starts in between Ueda’s strikes, “this isn't what I had in mind.”Ahaha reading this knowing Nakamaru likes Ueda, I thought, oh ( ... )

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sashjun March 27 2014, 13:30:50 UTC
UEDA who did you fight with?

Ueda denying he wants to go but then going anyway ;__; and Nakamaru's girl thought tangent is just painful, my heart, but yes this scene is wonderful, and I love that you take them back to banter at the end of it because they just have been good friends for years and that is hard to lose (Not too badly comment is gold tbqh)

lol comander nakamaru ;__; and crazy gunman ueda they are so A++ together. Also canon references everywhere *____*

*_____________* Ueda actually calls Nakamaru out on his behavior. And of course Nakamaru doesn't take his chance. UGH frustrating boys.

“Well,” Massu draws out, grating Nakamaru’s nerves, “I heard from Kame, who heard from Shige, who heard from Maruyama, who heard from Nishikido, who heard from…”
yes. this is how life works. rumor mills left and right. Nakamaru prepare to be shredded by it. dkflkedkjvkedl even if in this case they turn out to be false.

Okay so the basketball gym (!!!) scene.
“Now you know.”
UGH NAKAMARU YOU FRUSTRATING PETULANT PERSON

“I’ve ( ... )

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snowaltz March 26 2014, 16:08:22 UTC
I am very impressed of all the canon details you woven into this fic, you definitely kept up with them really well (^.^)b

I love how meddlesome Kame and Massu and Junno are fufufu. Nakamaru and Ueda are lucky to have group members/friends like that :D

Really enjoyed reading this, thanks for the wonderful read!<3

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loonykatt March 26 2014, 16:35:15 UTC
U kept up with them really well! Love this fic, thanks for sharing!

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dori_liv March 27 2014, 19:37:33 UTC
I love that he kisses him without waiting to see if the ball makes it or not! :)
And Kame the match-maker, who by the sounds of it, seems to own one or two miniskirts XD

Nice fic :)

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mayezinha March 31 2014, 00:45:54 UTC
Such an intrincate plotting to give Nakamaru a push!
Nice fic!
Thanks a lot for sharing!

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