FIC FOR LYNNKAT_TUN

Mar 27, 2014 15:33

For: lynnkat_tun
From: ayame_hadouken & je_levy

Title: Petzoned
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru/Koki
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: humour, petplay, daddy!kink
Notes: Dear lynnkat_tun, from your signup, I decided to give you some super fluffy, sweet Koki/Nakamaru. I hope you like it.
6,345 words. Thank to magical M <3 and thank to my beta and comedy expert, CG.
Summary: Yucchi asks Koki to be ( Read more... )

rated: nc-17, p: koki/nakamaru, year: 2014, ! fic

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mamushi_takki March 28 2014, 05:41:17 UTC
I was just passing by and...
OMG!! this is a master piece >/////< ♥♥♥♥♥
*nosebleed*
thanks to both of you :)

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je_levy April 8 2014, 00:48:17 UTC
Ahhh I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading :D

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lynnkat_tun March 28 2014, 13:21:45 UTC
helloooo!!!!!!! I'm sorry for my late comment!
omg this is so hot! this is my 1st time reading nakamaru/koki fic and i like it!
i didn't expect to get nakamaru/koki daddy kink! fic!! pet koki and master maru!
i laughed so hard and i imagined yuichi face and brad pit with jolie lip?! XD

this fic is sooooo hot! I'm really really REALLLY!!! glad this fic for me!! bottom koki is so hot! usually i read fic where koki is top but now you make me 'imagined' (I imaging a lot of things when i read this fic!!! omo!) about gangster wannabe koki as a bottom and called maru daddy with desperate face!!

Nakamaru!!! his character here make me think 'what if real life maru have this hot side of him in real life?! maru is not as innocent as i think of!!!!!

Thank you so much for writing this super hot fic for me!! You've done a very good job in writing it! I can't wait to know who you are author! *hugs*

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je_levy April 8 2014, 00:54:38 UTC
Oh I cannot tell you enough how much we were worried you might not like it all that much. We saw in your signup that you like Jin/Kame or Koki/Maru and to be very honest I hadn't written Akame in over four years and Amanda has never so we didn't want to attempt it and mess it up entirely lol. So yes, it's why we decided on Koki/Maru >.<

I'm so pleased I made you imagine bottom!Koki. I spend like 70% of my day imagining it so yeah, welcome to our world. Something about the sponge thug and his kitten ways makes me feel he's total bottom. Amanda agreed with me on this :P

Yes! So really, I'm so sooo happy you enjoyed the fic in the end. Thank you so much for the comment <3

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kazu_chan_love March 29 2014, 10:54:50 UTC
uwaaaaa~!!!!! this fic!!!!!

this is my first time to read Yuichi in a very hot fic... well ..i mean, its yuichi, im used in reading fics where he is just sweet and charming but not this hot...xDD
and this is surely my first time to read uke!koki..:D
but this is so awesome that I think id look for more tanakamaru fics like this...:DD

thank you for this..♥

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je_levy April 8 2014, 00:55:45 UTC
Yeah, Amanda and I have a terrible wonderful habit of writing Nakamaru like this. We also have a habit of writing uke!Koki lol. I'm so happy you enjoyed and thank you so so much for reading :3

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jtriskell March 30 2014, 21:15:59 UTC
je_levy April 8 2014, 00:56:12 UTC
Oh, hey there :D!

lol so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading <3

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sashjun April 3 2014, 19:18:49 UTC
I've read this today on a tram to and back from physio, and honestly on the way back it was literraly healing because parts of me ached so much, but I still had fun reading. But no really, Nakamaru as master manipulator extraordinaire, who at first does everything to make things the least sexual as possible as poor Koki battles his terrible attraction was just great. I loved how Koki himself progressed to what he wanted from Nakamaru, be it emotionally, sexually, and anything in between. Nakamaru agreeing readily and then setting up firm schedule was A++. I LOVED LOVED the cuddling scene UGH. And the bathing scene was ridiculous because feels and laughs and hot and bathing. Also all of Nakamaru comparisons to famous people ( ... )

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je_levy April 8 2014, 01:32:42 UTC
Ahh <3

Really, there was an initial struggle with this because I so want to be able to write Koki fic these days without jumping into all the feels and the pain but yeah keeping it simple like this worked out, thankfully.

I should mention the fact that it spoke volumes how Koki doesn't want to voice what he needs when Nakamaru wonders how to make him happy

Yes! Omg that was definitely my favourite part to add; the fact that Nakamaru is being so ambiguous and Koki knowing what it would mean to take advantage of Nakamaru wanting to take care of him and make him happy. It's a fine line I wanted to broaden a bit :3

haha I'm happy you enjoyed the nicknames too. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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