Critique please.

May 15, 2010 00:04


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estarti May 15 2010, 14:05:36 UTC
Hm... no. I think of recycling "go green" and Africa because of the child.

I don't really know what to look at first. I see the swirly sky, and the child really grabs my attention, and then all the typography blends in with the background, except for the "summer" bit which is in black and looks very dead compared to the rest of it. It's just really jam-packed and you can't really appreciate anything specifically because of all the color effects. I also don't really understand the program as you've described it, so that probably inhibits my overall intake.

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ficali May 15 2010, 18:30:11 UTC
I don't understand the program either. Haha. I'm supposed incorporate sustainability, supporting kids in africa through heifer and reading.

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