Prompt Post 2.0

Jun 23, 2012 14:58

With the season finale behind us I figure we'll have an explosion of prompts soon. So, new prompt post. Please post any new prompts in this post. But you can always find fic or fill more prompts in the original prompt post.

Rules!1) One prompt per post, please! If you have multiple prompts, no worries, just make separate posts for each. Please ( Read more... )

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Noatak + Tarrlok, That time Tarrlok bloodbended his brother anonymous July 7 2012, 21:36:19 UTC
Tarrlok didn't know Amon was his brother. Naturally this wasn't the case for Noatak.

I'd love to see a peek into Noatak's head when Tarrlok, who'd refused to bloodbend him even when their father demanded it, who was always so sickened by the art, used bloodbending on him and the Equalists. Bonus if this is what pushes Noatak to removing his bending rather than incapacitating him, regardless of what the Equalists think.

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Re: Noatak + Tarrlok, That time Tarrlok bloodbended his brother anonymous July 8 2012, 06:53:28 UTC
YES. This is now my new headcanon! (It was really sad, seeing such a sweet kid turn into a manipulative jerk.)

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Re: Noatak + Tarrlok, That time Tarrlok bloodbended his brother langs_de_lijn July 12 2012, 00:01:49 UTC
Uh, I hope you don't mind, but the situation in this prompt struck me, so I used it in a fic. (It's not a true fill, really, it's set after the fact and from Tarrlok's point of view.)

Should I post it here, anyway? Halp. I don't understand fill etiquette very well, I usually just lurk.

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Re: Noatak + Tarrlok, That time Tarrlok bloodbended his brother anonymous July 12 2012, 01:06:57 UTC
OP: Please do! I'd love to see what you wrote. :) Very glad the situation inspired you regardless of how close it sticks to the prompt.

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Re: Noatak + Tarrlok, That time Tarrlok bloodbended his brother anonymous July 12 2012, 14:25:53 UTC
Me too.

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Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 1/2 langs_de_lijn July 12 2012, 20:01:40 UTC
Or: if you call me brother * I think this one fits better but English-style title capitalization was irrationally bothering me so I didn't use it.

Also available here.

His brother came in, still clad in his revolutionary garb but without the mask now; good, he thought, then everyone in the city must know that their fabled leader was a hypocrite and a bloodbender and a liar, you lose, but all he said was his brother’s name. He hoped that got the point across that this was not a happy reunion.

Apparently, it didn’t, because Amon told him regretfully it was over, as if he cared about the fucking revolution, and if it was Noatak speaking at the moment, he was at a loss as to what, exactly, he thought was supposed to be over between the two of them. He had nothing to say to either Amon or Noatak. He had a thing or two to say to his big brother, but he’d lost him twenty-three years ago, and that was the one aspect of the man he didn’t see standing before him ( ... )

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Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 2/2 langs_de_lijn July 12 2012, 20:03:04 UTC
‘I saw what it did you to!’ and he had to bite his tongue not to argue again, that is wasn’t bloodbending but politics, that it had been the threat of Amon and a civil war that had changed him, because this was almost an apology for everything and he wasn’t going to get one any better than this. ‘You defied him, and then you refused to come with me because of our mother who never even knew what was happening to us,’ and that wasn’t fair, how could she know if they’d never told her, it wasn’t her fault, ‘and then even you resorted to bloodbending. I had to do it.’

‘What about you?’ he whispered, quietly.

‘I was too far gone even by the time I ran away,’ he admitted. ‘And I always thought you were the strong one.’

‘You didn’t,’ he said. ‘You said-’

‘I know what I said. I said what I thought. You refused him, and then you had to live with him after I left. It can’t have been easy. I’m sorry ( ... )

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Re: Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 2/2 anonymous July 13 2012, 20:13:05 UTC
OP: Afhejrqfksbhakjgdfwe THAT WAS SO FANTASTIC! The last line was magnificent and the transition between "Noatak is a horrible brother" to "WTF Tarrlok you blood bended me" was smooth and perfect and you deserve major kudos. Thank yo so much for sharing this!

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Re: Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 2/2 langs_de_lijn July 14 2012, 16:59:10 UTC
Thank you! :D

And of course I just noticed a typo. *sigh*

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Re: Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 2/2 anonymous July 15 2012, 02:49:03 UTC
Uh, wow. So this is pretty much fantastic in every single way possible. You captured the bloodbending brothers perfectly, and the sheer amount of feels in this was just eafjkrghfafdsg

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Re: Freedom (Tarrlok & Amon/Noatak) 2/2 langs_de_lijn July 19 2012, 15:45:30 UTC
Thank you!

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