Prompt Post 2.0

Jun 23, 2012 14:58

With the season finale behind us I figure we'll have an explosion of prompts soon. So, new prompt post. Please post any new prompts in this post. But you can always find fic or fill more prompts in the original prompt post.

Rules!1) One prompt per post, please! If you have multiple prompts, no worries, just make separate posts for each. Please ( Read more... )

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Noatak is Extremely Awkward anonymous September 3 2012, 15:27:26 UTC
Amon is charismatic. He's brilliant, magnetic, and has the crowds eating out of the palm of his hands. He's the man who spearheaded a city wide revolution, brought the entire police force to it's knees, and had you cheering him on all the way, just because he was so damn persuasive. And on top of that, he built the entire thing on a flimsy lie that everyone wholeheartedly believed. In short, he was one cunning, ruthless, captivating son-of-a-bitch.

But Noatak... not so much.

Take away the mask, the crowd, and the microphone, and suddenly our calculating revolutionary becomes a turtle duck with social skills on par with Azula.

So here's what I want to see: somehow, through situations of your choosing, Noatak finds himself on a date with one of the characters (preferably Korra, though you can use someone else, or even an OC if it strikes your fancy), and generally just makes a huge fool of himself. I leave the details up to you, but I want to cringe when I'm reading this ( ... )

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Re: Noatak is Extremely Awkward anonymous September 3 2012, 15:53:41 UTC
I'm in the middle of writing something rather large a few pages back so not sure I'll be able to fill, but I did write something that touched on this idea a while ago at http://ficbending.livejournal.com/1766.html?thread=1729769#t1729769 . Involves Tahno, Korra, and Noatak at a dating event for waterbenders. No worries at all if that's not your thing, but it does play with awkward!Noatak so thought I'd toss it over in case it is the sort of story you're looking for.

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Re: Noatak is Extremely Awkward anonymous September 3 2012, 20:28:03 UTC
THIS. This. Just... oh my god this is perfect.

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Re: Noatak is Extremely Awkward anonymous September 3 2012, 21:29:02 UTC
Seconding! There aren't enough awkward!Noatak fics out there

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Re: Noatak is Extremely Awkward anonymous September 4 2012, 13:52:03 UTC
YES.

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Noatak the awkward turtleduck 1 anonymous September 6 2012, 01:13:53 UTC
Noatak tapped his fingers against his glass irritably. He'd arrived too early, he knew, and now he was left sitting alone while the room around him filled up with couples and groups, normal people out to enjoy their evening. He didn't like being isolated in a crowd like this, it was the kind of thing he taught his followers to avoid unless they were armed and a clear escape plan.

He looked up at the clock over the bar. Ten minutes past. He eyed the two exits, first the main entrance and, twisting around to confirm, one through the swinging door into the kitchen. He'd tried to get a table against a wall, at the very least, but the waiter had insisted they were all reserved.

If Mrs. Li could go through the trouble to arrange this encounter, he thought bitterly, she could have at least reserved a table for it.He should have ignored the knock on his door, that was the first thing. He should have kept sleeping through it. But it had been some time in the early afternoon, a time when the normal man Noatak was supposed to be would be ( ... )

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 2 anonymous September 6 2012, 01:56:20 UTC
After snatching a few more hours of sleep, he'd shown up at the popular, bustling Narook’s, for a date of all things, like he didn't have a thousand more important things to do. Dates were something that happened to those who could afford the luxury of wasting hours socializing and spending money on each other.

He felt ridiculous, a forty-year-old man waiting around to meet some poor girl who’d probably moved to Republic City to get away from the Water Tribe. He hoped she was a non-bender at least. Maybe there was some way he could gently nudge her toward the Equalists, they’d been trying to increase the number of young recruits in the buildup.

Noatak looked at the clock again. He felt a sudden hope that perhaps she would be standing him up. What was he even going to talk to her about? Then again, he led crowds as Amon, a simple evening with one girl should be painless enough. Compliment her appearance, ask about her day...what else...

He decided to leave once it reached a quarter past. No idea, she never arrived give her my ( ... )

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 2 digitalada September 6 2012, 04:46:00 UTC
Not OP, but I like this! I love the idea of Amon being super awkward without the mask. And of course, the fact that he's on a blind date with Korra makes it even more hilarious.

I also like how Mrs. Li probably doesn't even know that she ended up setting Noatak up with Korra, since it's a humorous "my friend's sister's boyfriend has a cousin who knows some people who know gangsters" type of situation.

I look forward to reading more, especially because Amorra has recently become one of the pairings I ship a lot.

(The more angst a character has, the more I feel like shipping him/her with Korra.)

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 2 anonymous September 6 2012, 17:40:04 UTC
Thanks, the next two parts should be up later today. I'm warning you in advance that this is pretty much the opposite of Amorra.

I see the setup as Pema's doing - she didn't mention it was Korra because she figured word would get around that the Avatar needed a ~date~, and that would just make things harder on the poor girl.

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 2 digitalada September 6 2012, 22:14:14 UTC
For some reason, Pema setting people up on blind dates doesn't surprise me. And it's fine if this is different from Amorra because variety is good.

Okay, going to read the rest now.

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 2 anonymous September 7 2012, 03:35:49 UTC
wait... what do you mean, 'opposite of amorra?'

this anon is a little worried, because your fic has a good start

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OP Here anonymous September 6 2012, 20:11:56 UTC
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I didn't think anyone would actually fill this. Thank you so much! I love your Overly-Analytical!Noatak, and his internal monologues are exactly what I imagine the inside of Amon's head would look like. Can't wait for the next update.

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Re: OP Here anonymous September 7 2012, 02:01:11 UTC
I'm glad it's what you were thinking of, it's a great idea! I'm afraid Noatak's awkwardness turned out to be a little less than endearing, sadly. I'm incapable of making him lovable.

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 3 anonymous September 6 2012, 20:29:52 UTC
“Oh, right."

The girl just stood there-what is she waiting for-then helped herself to a seat. “Well, I was feeling kind of homesick," she started, "and Tenzin-my airbending teacher-his wife Pema thought I needed to get my mind off some things, so she asked around and, well...“ She shrugged and picked up the pitcher in the center of the table, pouring water into the glass nearest her. "Here we are." She toasted him with a half-smile.

He leaned forward, ignoring the gesture. Something in her casual confidence irritated him. “Things?” Equalist things?

“Oh well,” Korra mumbled into her glass, suddenly less assured. “There was a guy I’d been thinking about-“

Great. Noatak sat back and rolled his eyes. She stopped abruptly. “Well sorry to bore you.”

At least she realized it. “Don’t worry about it,” he reassured her, and cast about for a new topic of conversation. Compliment her.“It's just, it's a shame you're having problems,” he invented. “You know, boys your age can be shallow, they mostly care about how a girl looks ( ... )

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 4 anonymous September 6 2012, 21:25:13 UTC
Noatak requested seaweed soup, something he could finish quickly. Mrs. Li had directed him to show her around the city-maybe the fire lily garden or the tea market!-and the sooner they got out of here the sooner he could end this nightmare. Korra ordered noodles, sea crab and sea prunes. Noatak couldn’t contain a look of disgust at her avarice.

The Avatar stared back at him, then finally decided to lift her share of the conversational load. “Uhh...so where are you from?”

“Republic City. My parents immigrated from the Northern Water Tribe when I was just one.”

There was a pause. He’d forgotten the rest of his invented childhood. It had been years since he’d been required to have such an in-depth conversation.

He gave up. “And you’re from the South, right?” he prompted.

She nodded. “Yeah! I miss it, though I had to spend most of my time in the White Lotus compound anyway.” She propped her chin in her hand and sighed. “Sometimes I wish I could’ve grown up here, this place is amazing“Wrong,” he said flatly ( ... )

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Re: Noatak the awkward turtleduck 4 digitalada September 6 2012, 22:20:15 UTC
I'm still enjoying Noatak's awkwardness a lot. I like that he's trying to show Korra the bad side of Republic City too. One of the things that really bothered me about s1 of the show was that there was way to much focus on that obnoxious love triangle and not enough focus on the plot or the idea that while Amon may be a creepy dude, he still has some valid points.

I also like the discussion of Korra's airbending training too.

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