Prompt Post 2.0

Jun 23, 2012 14:58

With the season finale behind us I figure we'll have an explosion of prompts soon. So, new prompt post. Please post any new prompts in this post. But you can always find fic or fill more prompts in the original prompt post.

Rules!1) One prompt per post, please! If you have multiple prompts, no worries, just make separate posts for each. Please ( Read more... )

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"You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 4 2012, 23:30:45 UTC
What if the two sets of brothers in LoK were switched?

That is, when Korra gets to Republic City, she meets two handsome water-bending brothers near her age: the aloof, secretive Noatak and charming Tarrlok.

Meanwhile, she has to deal with the overly-friendly Councilman Bolin badgering her to join the fight against the revolutionary Amon.

Because, hey Mako's parents really were killed by firebenders, so his Amon backstory would at least be partly true. And I think young, smarmy Tarrlok would be perfectly irritating to Korra.

Plus, it makes me happy to imagine that Bolin's reaction to discovering Amon is Mako is the same teary, snot-filled freakout as when he found Korra and Mako kissing in the actual show.

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Re: (FILL 4/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 20 2012, 03:58:54 UTC
Tell me this isn't abandoned, it's so good!

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Re: (FILL 4/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 20 2012, 22:15:36 UTC
This was such an interesting idea. I LOVE teenage Noatak and Tarrlok meeting Korra. But this hasn't seen an update in a bit... please continue it! Pretty please! :)

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Re: (FILL 5/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 23 2012, 05:00:35 UTC

Note: Gah, there’s a short piece missing between 3 and 4 because the parts kept exceeding the character limit. It’s ok though because it doesn’t really interrupt the story.
“All right then,” Lalam said. “How about you show me what you can do, Avatar.”
Tarrlok visibly relaxed when Korra gave an exultant shout of agreement and let him go and backed toward the railing. Noatok watched him, mindful of his brother’s  racing heart and paled face. As much fun as petrifying his brother was, he decided to have mercy. Korra and Lalam were halfway out the door as Noatok pinched his brother slightly, drawing him out of his daze.
“Well, you two have fun,” he said.
“You’re not coming?” Korra asked, mild surprise coloring her tone.
“I don’t bend,” he shrugged, a truth and a lie. His technique was…entirely untraditional; he barely had to move at all. He wasn’t sure if he remembered the proper movements anymore and did not feel up to explaining his clear advancement. He jerked a thumb at Tarrlok, “and it’s past this one’s bed time. Another time maybe.” ( ... )

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Re: (FILL 5/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 24 2012, 04:16:57 UTC
Update, hooray! I love the way you write Noatak, not really evil but not quite nice either.

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Re: (FILL 6/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 24 2012, 05:01:35 UTC
Their home was a long trolley ride from the shining arena, almost a world away. It was a step up from what they’d originally lived in when they first came to the city five years ago. This apartment had electricity, a kitchen, plumbing, and sometimes, the fan worked without shooting off sparks. It wasn’t pretty, and the door stuck, but it was home and it was theirs ( ... )

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Re: (FILL 6.20/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) c3childs July 24 2012, 05:03:57 UTC
As for himself, things were…complicated ( ... )

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Re: (FILL 6.20/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous August 15 2012, 14:49:16 UTC
I'd dearly love to see more of this - I love the way the brothers interact.

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Re: (FILL 6.20/?) "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) zara2148 August 31 2012, 22:40:23 UTC
*salivating* Oh, this is SO good. I cannot wait for Amon!Mako (Amako? Amonako?) to show up.

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Re: "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 6 2012, 03:15:52 UTC
Huh. Really, really interesting.

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Re: "You're not a brother, you're a brother betrayer!" (Amon, Tarrlok, Mako, Bolin) anonymous July 6 2012, 06:38:07 UTC
This Anon WANTS. I'll be checking back regularly. Somebody hop to it!

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