Prompt Post 2.0

Jun 23, 2012 14:58

With the season finale behind us I figure we'll have an explosion of prompts soon. So, new prompt post. Please post any new prompts in this post. But you can always find fic or fill more prompts in the original prompt post.

Rules!1) One prompt per post, please! If you have multiple prompts, no worries, just make separate posts for each. Please ( Read more... )

lin beifong is my hero, sparkle bush, prompt post

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Equilibrium (1/?) anonymous August 13 2012, 14:14:29 UTC
It's in progress, and I still can't make promises about how far it will get. Decided to try posting bit-by-bit.

Water is drawn from his lungs in a stream. He feels it before he sees it. When he inhales again the air grates, sticks down his throat. His back arches. He can't breathe properly, struggles to escape his own ribs, knows something must have snapped already but can't identify what.

His shoulders are being clamped together, restricted. He gasps, tries to cough as everything burns as his face burns. He tilts, off-balance in his own skull. The grip does not lessen even though he can't feel his right side at all, it's numb and the breath drives into him harder, irregular, uneven like a saw. Something else bubbles out through his lips--hot and wet and thick. He can't see. There are dark shapes flaring in front of his eyes. Spirits, his face is burning his eyes are burning the vice around him remains let me breathe I can't, I can't ( ... )

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OP anonymous August 31 2012, 20:16:18 UTC
Trust me... NO ONE is complaining here. *is silently cheering*

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Re: Equilibrium (6/?) anonymous September 2 2012, 19:26:10 UTC
He watches the road through window grating. It’s foggy out. There hasn’t been a car for some time ( ... )

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Re: Equilibrium (6/?) anonymous September 3 2012, 01:04:05 UTC
Welp. This Tear Jerker scene is gonna be stuck in my head for a while. And.. aaand... it's there. Good job anon! D'x

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Re: Equilibrium (7/?) anonymous September 4 2012, 04:32:18 UTC
His confession pours into the air. Nobody listens.

He still misses him. He misses the boy who closed his parka against the cold, who taught him to fish, who would whisper ghost stories at night when their parents thought them asleep. Who was willing to stand against their father but in the next moment abandoned him to the storm.

Tarrlok is not a child anymore. It shouldn’t serve as a constant reminder that he is and has always been unworthy, unwelcome.

Pathetic.

Amon no longer knew him, loved only the idea of his brother as a last resort. If the revolution had ended differently he still might be rotting away in that cell, a different cell. They had become strangers to each other standing on opposite sides of a war. Of course it mattered. He will never understand how Noatak could imagine otherwise.

He wants to hate him.

He wants to plead for forgiveness.

He wants to see him again and never see him again.

He wants to be free.

And yet, like a caged animal, he’s afraid of what freedom will cost.

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Re: Equilibrium (7/?) anonymous September 4 2012, 23:02:13 UTC
No Tarrlok. He loved you all the way, I'm sure. It's why you're alive here, right? He didn't want you to burn with him. T-T

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Author Anon anonymous September 16 2012, 06:22:06 UTC
This is a very late reply, but I just wanted to let you know that your comment totally influenced some of the points brought up in section eight big time. :) Thank you so much!

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Re: Equilibrium (7/?) anonymous September 5 2012, 01:58:21 UTC
The last couple lines hit pretty hard, since I'm pretty sure doesn't Tarrlok know what being "free" even means anymore.

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Re: Equilibrium (8/8) anonymous September 7 2012, 08:01:22 UTC
“You need to stop looking back.” Tenzin watches him carefully. He’s been visiting more often, offering news of events beyond this institution. The topics are uniformly pleasant and trivial. “You’re only destroying yourself ( ... )

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Author Anon anonymous September 7 2012, 08:05:08 UTC
And that's a wrap! Thanks a ton for sticking around for this story. :) I loved the challenge, and really hope it's made for an interesting read. Will link a more polished version once it's up.

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Re: Author Anon theun4givables September 7 2012, 11:36:03 UTC
I love this fill. So much. Ugh, my feels.

This was beautiful, anon. In a sad, torturous way. ;)

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Author Anon anonymous September 16 2012, 06:24:08 UTC
Super late reply, but I wanted to say thanks so much for reading and commenting! It means a lot to know that you enjoyed this fill (bleak as it is, haha) and that it resonated with you. :)

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Re: Author Anon anonymous September 7 2012, 20:08:56 UTC
*applause* Just... thanks a ton anon. I loved reading this story and the feels that came with it. NOW I AM FREEEE ahaha.

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Author Anon anonymous September 16 2012, 06:26:28 UTC
Thank YOU anon! :D Really, I'm so thrilled that this made you feel strongly and that you had a good time reading it. ENJOY YOUR FREEDOM KNOWING THAT TARRLOK'S SANITY IS THE PRICE LOL. ;P

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OP anonymous September 7 2012, 20:10:58 UTC
I can go back to my life now!! :'D I'm really, really grateful that you wrote this, Anon.

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Author Anon anonymous September 16 2012, 06:28:58 UTC
XD I know I already said on tumblr, but just wanted to say again thanks a ton OP! Your prompt was brilliant, and I'm just glad my story filled it in a way that made you happy. :> Thank you for prompting it and for sticking around all this time!

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