Well, I think you did a great job! I especially like Nick's in the alternate ending.
Ah, but longer in this case is definitely better. "Worth it" seems to imply that it's a chore (unless you were referring to the wait rather than the length). Either way, I already know that it most definitely will be worth whatever "it" is.
Oh, I just meant the wait. But I am flattered and flustered yet again. I know I'm evil and I keep doing cliffhangers and then getting distracted with school and not posting in a timely manner. Cliffhangers are effective, though. I have about 12-13 pages currently and I'd say this one could go up to 20 or over to fit in everything in "my vision".
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(When I first got the notification I thought it was a new chapter and got really excited, but anything is good!)
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The next chapter is on its way. The thing is, this one is much longer than the last few. But it'll be worth it. I promise.
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Ah, but longer in this case is definitely better. "Worth it" seems to imply that it's a chore (unless you were referring to the wait rather than the length). Either way, I already know that it most definitely will be worth whatever "it" is.
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Oh, I just meant the wait. But I am flattered and flustered yet again.
I know I'm evil and I keep doing cliffhangers and then getting distracted with school and not posting in a timely manner. Cliffhangers are effective, though. I have about 12-13 pages currently and I'd say this one could go up to 20 or over to fit in everything in "my vision".
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hell yeah.
imagine if blixa were there...
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