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In vino veritas

Mar 17, 2012 21:56

Title: In vino veritas
Author: ficcingagain
Spoilers: 3x11
Rating: PG for alcohol abuse
Summary: Written for midtega's Ficcy Friday request: An inter monolgoue of jeff's thoughts of what made annie go into his heart.
Word Count: 620
Disclaimer: I do not own community. I do own a case of Coke Zero and a bottle of Crown Royale, which helped put me in a mindset to write ( Read more... )

Comments 11

rozicanuti March 18 2012, 04:18:25 UTC

Awesomeness!!! Loved it! She's in his heart! *freaks out*

ficcingagain March 18 2012, 18:45:22 UTC

Inorite? It's more legitimacy for this ship, gotta love it.

sinecure March 18 2012, 06:59:05 UTC

Hehe. Love Jeff's thoughts and that he was narrating himself. And that Abed was there to see what he'd wrought. Hee.

ficcingagain March 18 2012, 18:50:27 UTC

Thanks. I love the idea of Abed sitting there watching Jeff spill his guts, figuratively and literally. He's coaxed plenty of honest talk out of Jeff in the past, I bet a drunk enough Jeff wouldn't think twice about opening up to him again.

nyclove3 March 18 2012, 13:54:31 UTC

ficcingagain March 18 2012, 18:59:10 UTC

Thank you! The prompt had called for an inner monologue, but I thought it'd be funny if there was nothing inner about it. At least Jeff can count on Abed's discretion. I think.

rufeepeach March 18 2012, 15:39:16 UTC

I can see Abed giving Jeff a ride home, and just crashing there, without thinking anything of it. And I loved Jeff narrating his thoughts... maybe because I sometimes do that when I've been on the no-no juice...

ficcingagain March 18 2012, 19:03:16 UTC

Heh, I don't think I've ever narrated, but I do get pretty chatty with enough no-no juice. Thanks for commenting!

midtega March 18 2012, 22:28:15 UTC

Oh thank u so much for doing this. Brings me joy that one of my ideas inspried some writer to do this. I love the twist jeff really said his thoughts out loud and that abed after all his loud narratting was the one to see jeff do it. Such funny irony. Once again thank u so much for doing this.

ficcingagain March 19 2012, 02:29:05 UTC

Don't thank me, thank Crown Royale! ;)

It was fun to write, and especially to write in the random, rambling thought process of the very drunk. I had to restrain myself a bit, to keep it mostly focused and short. Glad you liked it!