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COMMENTARY: "Order" from the Disclosureverse

Nov 21, 2008 03:58

Hello, and welcome to another stunning fic commentary!

Title: Order
The working title was Trial, but seriously, could it be more obvious?
Series: Disclosureverse
Summary: Phoenix stands trial.
I hate summaries. Does anyone actually like them?
Fandom: Gyakuten Saiban
Word Count: 2181 3619 with commentary and markup
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, AU, ( Read more... )

Comments 2

maskdemasque November 21 2008, 23:18:56 UTC

It was interesting to read and fun, as well as sad, but I do have one quibble. Didn't Kristoph and Phoenix not know each other until after the disbarment? I think it says in the game that Phoenix only got to know him afterwards, because Kristoph WAS the only one on the panel who stood in his defense.

sabinelagrande November 21 2008, 23:50:17 UTC

...Actually, I'd forgotten all about that- but if I'd remembered, I'd still have written it this way. I wanted to play Kristoph and Edgeworth off of one another, so I brought him in a little early. It also makes Kristoph eviler, which I think is good in this AU, because I think a society like this would feed people like him.

Thanks for reading!