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Start to Finish: Chapter 4: Hotchner Family

Mar 12, 2011 07:11

Title: Start to Finish
Author: ficdirectory
Characters: Hotchner Family
Word Count: 23,799 - Chapter 4/10
Warnings/Spoilers/Rating: Character Death, Loss of a Loved One, Violence, Post-Traumatic Stress/Seasons 1-6/FRT.
Summary: Hotch's time in the BAU and with his family.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the CBS-owned characters mentioned. Not written for ( Read more... )

jack, warning: character death, warning: violence, author: ficdirectory, warning: post-traumatic stress, criminal minds, warning: loss of a loved one, title: start to finish, hotch, rating: pg-13, words: 10000-29999

Comments 12

szarabasjka March 18 2011, 23:30:24 UTC

Awww.., this one is the best so far.
There's not a worst thing for a kid to say than they hate their parents.

My cousin told his mom he hated her and she died two days latter, those were the last things he ever said to her, and he'll regret it forever.

I can imagine the feeling that someone is in the room where a person died, even if not violently, its so well writen, and I like your Jack more than the one on TV LOL

ficdirectory March 19 2011, 00:08:15 UTC

Aw, thank you! Glad you enjoyed this.

I can sympathize with the feeling that someone may hang around after death as well, not in a creepy way, but in a comforting way. And that's amazing! I love knowing you like Jack so much! He is great to write!