Start to Finish: Chapter 8: Prentiss

Mar 16, 2011 06:48

Title: Start to Finish
Author: ficdirectory
Characters: Prentiss
Word Count: 23,799 - Chapter 8/10
Warnings/Spoilers/Rating: Character Death, Loss of a Loved One/Seasons 2-6/FRT.
Summary: Emily’s time in the BAU.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the CBS-owned characters mentioned. Not written for profit.
Notes: Over the last week, I have written a crazy ( Read more... )

warning: character death, prentiss, author: ficdirectory, criminal minds, warning: loss of a loved one, rating: pg-13, title: start to finish, words: 10000-29999

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yaba324 March 16 2011, 18:43:45 UTC
:(. I am sad but still very much in awe of your writing. Your stuff, is as always, powerful and now I'm wondering what's next. I really liked how you showed this extremely vulnerable side of Emily here, while still picking out moments where she is strong and resilient. Her constantly referring to the team as her family broke my heart but in a good way :P. It's definitely setting me up for tonight's episode. I AM NERVOUS!!

Great Job :).

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ficdirectory March 16 2011, 19:04:29 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I think Emily ended up being my favorite character to write for this, just because there is so much depth to her, and I'd only written her once before (Blows and Wounds). I really appreciate your always letting me know what you liked. I know! I am nervous, too, but excited to see a familiar face back in the BAU again! <3 <3 <3

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brownsinman33 March 17 2011, 14:07:05 UTC
I loved this. I really do wish that she would return to CM.... She was my favorite character, and I would hate to be disappointed if I don't like the pilot she's in (which I pray to the god I don't believe in that it doesn't).

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ficdirectory March 17 2011, 14:29:50 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed this. Emily wasn't my favorite character but really won me over in the end. And writing her was so intriguing. She was definitely my favorite to write. I hope her pilot is good. She deserves the best.

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nannerz2cool March 17 2011, 21:50:38 UTC
When her tears drop onto the images. Prentiss shakes her head.

She can't remember when she started crying.

Then again, she can't remember stopping either.

Ohhhh, Emilyyyyyyy!

"No treats," she insists. "No way. You've made me very angry."

Aw, Serge! I hope someone awesome is taking care of you!

Reid suspects. He asks who Lauren is. She tells him she was an old friend. She does not tell him the truth.

I'm here.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!

Yeah, I pretty much love all of Emily! <3

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ficdirectory March 18 2011, 02:50:49 UTC
I knooooooooow! She's so sad. And it's sad. "Prentiss sad..."

Oh :( I never thought of that. I bet one of the ladies will take him.

I love it, too!

Oh, gosh! Yay! I love all of Emily, too!

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szarabasjka March 29 2011, 22:26:09 UTC
and I hope they will.
I'm pretty sure that if Hotch tells the team she's alive Garcia will find her within the next week, then Reid and Morgan will be there too, and at the end the whole "hiding" would go just wrong.

At least she has JJ right?
is it weird that I want yet another cat (I feed at least 16 strays and my own two)and call him Sergio?

Prentiss is one of my fav female characters in TV this days, no need to show ridiculously skimpy clothes to have the work done and no need to be Michelle Rodriguez Clon to look badass. she IS great and hope she stays on CM.
moving on to Reid/the next now that I have time

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ficdirectory March 30 2011, 20:15:45 UTC
Ahaha! That would be amazing if you got a kitty named Sergio! So glad you liked this!

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