Loved the aunts in this. I see you''ve mentioned in the A/N notes that your thinking of turning it in to a verse? I would read more in this verse! It'd be interesting to see Jensen and Jerard work threw their problems
Interesting reactions to your story. I can't say I agree with most of the comments--I didn't really see either one of them as being abusive towards the other, I just saw two poor totally confused and not very socially-ept young boys badly mishandling a relationship.
I'm glad they got back together in the end, had figured that the earlier break-up came because Jensen panicked and Jared over-reacted and it all snowballed as it can sometimes. I hope that you might come back to this and expand a bit on them getting back together. My only quibble was that the reconciliation came about a bit too quick, but mostly I guess because I wanted a bit more making-up there. :) I'd love to see Jensen's pov during that last bit at the party.
Thanks very much for sharing this--I should have been in bed a *long* time ago, but I had to finish this first. ;)
Okay first off, I have to tell you how much I love your writing. There's a funny sarcasm in Jared's thoughts even when he's hurting and that just made it more realistic while reading the story. Nothing was overdramatic and Jared's characterization was solid from beginning to end. But God, you really put the poor guy through the ringer. I wasn't expecting Jensen and Chad scheming the whole thing, and was extremely satisfied when Jared punched Jensen in the face, though I thought Chad deserved it too. Like most of the comments, I wasn't thrilled to see how apologetic and guilty Jared ended up feeling because having your heart broken over and over can really drive a person insane
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LOVED the story, but like everyone else here, didn't completely like that Jared's feelings were so discarded. He was going off the rails and doing himself some real harm and instead of helping him, his "friends" decided his life for him. And Jensen, expecting Jared to just love him enough and know enough to get back with him even though he'd caused him so much pain was..ugh, irking me so bad. *kicks Jensen in the shin* And then in the end, even though it seems Jared was happy again, it still seemed to be HIS fault for it all happening. :( So I guess REALLY good writing, for making us feel so much! ;D
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I would read more in this verse!
It'd be interesting to see Jensen and Jerard work threw their problems
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I'm glad they got back together in the end, had figured that the earlier break-up came because Jensen panicked and Jared over-reacted and it all snowballed as it can sometimes. I hope that you might come back to this and expand a bit on them getting back together. My only quibble was that the reconciliation came about a bit too quick, but mostly I guess because I wanted a bit more making-up there. :) I'd love to see Jensen's pov during that last bit at the party.
Thanks very much for sharing this--I should have been in bed a *long* time ago, but I had to finish this first. ;)
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