PTM Pt Five

Nov 30, 2009 05:51

Title: Paper Thin Moon Pt Five
Written by Mandi/Fics-At-Random
Rated: PG to NC-17 in parts, this one is PG-13.

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ptm, bbm, paper thin moon, ennis/jack

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mariez65 December 1 2009, 16:32:21 UTC
Nicely done. What a fine line they're all walking. I'm continually amazed at the power and intricacy of the human mind.

“What if you… don’t remember the way home?” Alma asked, an would later laugh in a bitter irony of what she had said t’him that day.

Oh my. Not an unexpected flash into the future, but it's so sad there has to be such pain for everyone. Thank you!

Marie

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Paper thin moon argentine65 December 1 2009, 16:43:18 UTC
You are back and bringing this boys. It looks like BBM is making its magic and Ennis is feeling what Jack could be for him. I love how they relive their time in the mountain and I hope Ennis could remember his love for Jack. Thank you so much and till your next post. Martha

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hampshirerose December 1 2009, 16:52:15 UTC
This was worth the wait! It's good to have them on their own again on Brokeback. I like the clever way you are slowly bringing pieces of Ennis' memory back.

Thank goodness for your determination!

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ramona4jake December 1 2009, 19:42:08 UTC
It's like Jack was fighting against windmills..... until this morning ! I hope they will stop ignoring the pink elephant in the....er, tent ! ;o)
Thank you so much for the up-date !

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will they? grlewis December 4 2009, 23:57:28 UTC
i missed this story. it's been too long since your last instllment.

well, i'm glad ennis went into the tent when he got too cold, but what will he do now that he's awakened and found jack's hand on his chest. i hope he remembers more about kissing jack; remembers their love for each other. i also hope he realizes that it's much stronger than his feelings toward alma. and maybe, just maybe he'll forget how afraid he is for them being together. but i guess that's only conjecture on my part. how can he forget it; he's always felt it so strongly? maybe if he remembers it he'll just put his feelings for jack first. i mean you will be doing that, right? how will you deal with ennis leaving a crippled junior behind? seems it will be extra hard on him.

i can't wait to see how your dream resolved THE problems. at least i hope it did.

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