Wowwee! Dare I say that this chapter is one of the best you have ever written. My goodness! I have so many emotions running through me that I cannot make a coherent comment. I loved it, am in awe of it, and cannot wait to see where you go from here. I adore what you are doing with this story. It is brilliant. Happy New Year, Mandi. You were one of my bright spots for 2009 and it looks like you will be a shining star in 2010 as well. You floor me with the way you tell a story. Well done, well done.
very intense, wow! ennis's whole world is turned upside down now. i hope they're able to get back to where they were, or someplace even better. thanks for the update- love this story :) jill
This was wonderful! Ennis's reactions were expected, though they hurt Jack. But, I think they're getting somewhere at least. Thanks for the update! Camilla
What a nice surprise to find a new chapter. Ennis's reaction was better than I thought. He remembered his feelings if not actual memory. Enni's immediate denial must have hurt Jack alot. Hope that Ennis talks to Jack and tries to work things out between them. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you!
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thanks for the update- love this story :)
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Thank you!
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