Fic... sorta

[ficsbygilly]

Ok, this is one I started over the weekend when I was trapped internet-less. I don't know if it's all that great, and if I should continue on with it or not. Input please? Just let me know if it sounds all right, or if anything should be fixed, or if it's destined for the scrap heap. This is NOT a finished story! It's not even a finished chapter of

Comments

[inell]

Ooooh...this is lovely! Beta wise, just a few spelling errors/missed words but that would be caught on read through when you were ready to post. I love the examination of the Wolf parts. I've got a huge fascination with wolf and man and especially now that Bill is probably just a little wolfy and, yeah, the darkness and dominance of the wolf part makes me squee *grin* I'd LOVE to see this explored more. Hits my squick of him still being with Fleur and especially her with child but I think I can deal with that because Bill is just perfectly written and I'd love to read more between him and Hermione.

So far, so good

[chalgyr]

Yes, yes - bias out the window, I like conflicted main chars. Good Vs. Dark in them, and so on. I don't know much about the cannon storyline - I don't read the books, so my knowledge is based on what my wifey here shared with me, but I had said early on that the werewolf theme was a great one to build fanfic around, imo.

[tyskn]

oh continue if you can Gilly!! This was a VERY well done start *and you know I don't read much Charlie and Bill....at this point anyway* Keep going and see where it leads you on this!!!!