Fic: Positive Reinforcement| Neal/Peter/Elizabeth| R

[ficsoreal]

Fic: Positive Reinforcement
Author: ficsoreal
Pairing: Neal/Peter/Elizabeth
Rating: R
Words: 1149
Summary: Neal returns from walking Satchmo and receives a treat.
Notes/Warnings: Written for villainny's Sex is Not the Enemy Fic/Artathon. My Prompt.
Disclaimer: All television shows, movies, books, and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the

Comments

[rubynye]

ZOMG. Yes. I am rendered incoherent by threesomey joy.

[ficsoreal]

They are really too precious together...and sexy.

[b_scholes]

Hot hot hot!

Best opening paragraph as well
"Elizabeth was straddling Peter, black bra stark against her pale skin; they’d started without him again. "

He he he. Poor neal, he does so hate to be left out.

[ficsoreal]

Neal doesn't want to miss any of the fun. D:

Thanks so much for commenting; it's so difficult for me to judge the hotness of a story while I'm writing. :)

[elrhiarhodan]

Oh my goodness, what a lovely way to start my day. I think you've nailed the voices and characters perfectly.

[ficsoreal]

Oh, that's the best thing to hear! I'm always so worried about my voices.

[tellitslant]

Heeeee, I LOVE the end of this. It's so perfect.

[ficsoreal]

Ahahaha. Neal desires more sexytimes, but the Burkes need their rest. :)

[secretsolitaire]

Hot and fun! Enjoyed this. :-)

[ficsoreal]

Thanks!