Fic: The Exception| Jensen/Cougar, Pooch/Jolene, Clay/Aisha| NC 17

[ficsoreal]

Title: The Exception
Author: ficsoreal
Pairing: Jensen/Cougar, Pooch/Jolene, Clay/Aisha
Rating: NC 17
Words: 5883
Notes/Warnings: Spoilers for The Losers (movie).
Summary: Jensen's always chasing the wrong person.
Disclaimer: All television shows, movies, books, and other copyrighted material referred to in this work, and the characters, settings, and

Comments

[kelly_girl]

Omg, this was awesome and I need to tell everyone about it right now. I love your Cougar. Your Jensen is the right mix of needy and funny and hot, just like I saw him in the movie.

Loved Pooch and Jolene teaming up on Jensen. Loved Cougar wanting to do all these dirty delicious things to Jensen.

Thank you for sharing and I hope you will write more. Seriously I had to stop reading at a few points because it was so good it made me dizzy. And now I want a Cougar of my very own.

[ficsoreal]

I want to write something from Jensen's point of view where he totally misses it every time someone comes on to him with Cougar shaking his head in the background! Jensen's fail is Cougar's gain. LOL.

[kelly_girl]

That would be hilarious because Jensen would be all "what just happened?" and Cougar would just be quietly amused. And then he'd move in like a shark and make sure Jensen knew who he belonged to.

[damion_starr]

Uh....I.....*drops dead*

[ficsoreal]

Nooooooo! Come back to life! Thanks. ♥

[buhhhfaluffalo]

Guhhhh -fans self-

"Jensen is like the sunrise when all you want to do is pull the covers back over your head and sleep three more hours"

I want to marry this line, it's friggin' hysterical.

[ficsoreal]

That's one of my favorite lines! Jensen is just so cheerful even in the midst of battle. Glad you liked it.

[onewayfreak]

It's so great when a fic labeled NC-17 actually IS NC-17.

This was completely sweet and burningly hot. You wrote them like men, which probably sounds like a really weird compliment, but seriously, not a lot of people have this talent. The way you get inside Cougar's head is fantastic, and he sounds like such a GUY. Like, this is two men who friends and are having sex. This is how it works.

Lord I hope you write more of this pairing.

[ficsoreal]

I struggled with the rating R/NC 17, but I thought the ass worship pushed it over the top. :)

Ha. Writing men can be super tricky. I was really watching my descriptors and thought patterns. Silky, pale thighs need not apply. I'm glad it worked for you. Cougar is a sexy beast in my head; he kissed both girls, okay, and they didn't mind!

Hopefully, I'll be bitten by more Jensen/Cougar plots.

[scoodoo58]

This so adorable.

I like how you had the slutwoman in the beginning of the story, and then had Jolene and Pooch exacerbating the situation later on.

I especially liked the line about Cougar's thoughts on the woman coming to him when they could have Jensen, it shows how deep into it he is with this Jensen thing.

[ficsoreal]

Cougar is so into Jensen and he knows it. ♥