[DBSK] - [FIC] [C] X Years From Now

[fictionalkitty]

Disclaimer: clearly i don't own any boys... not intended to hurt or harm, just for fun.
Rating: PG
Genre: kind of angsty
People: Jaejoong POV
Pairing: JaeHo
Warnings: cliche maybe?

Summary: Jaejoong can see where this is all going and if he can't have his happy ending, he'll take Yunho's.

Comments

[dapdaphae]

this. this is simply gorgeous and it just kind of makes my heart ache because of the bitterness that's spliced in between the years of a half-romance that lie ahead of them.

I’ll take your children and take your house, and sleep in your bed. You’ll let me take it all and it’ll be like I had a family with you.

just, mm. i love love love this.

envy is a color jaejoong wears well. ♥

[samikitty]

ahaha... i hadn't intended it to be quite so bitter when i started writing it... (i got the first paragraph stuck in my head after lunch yesterday...) but somehow it came out this way! (boy, was i surprised. haha.) thanks for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. *O* i'm really flattered to hear that it moved your heart~~~ *O* ♥♥

[livesmiling]

wow this is different.

its so angsty but the plotline is so unlike the usual we cant be tgts, this is wonderful bb.

meming. write more (:

[samikitty]

^O^;;;; thank you so much for such a lovely comment~~ *O* i'm sure the plotline has been covered by better writers before, but it was a first for me so i'm happy to hear that it worked. ^^;;;;;;

♥! thanks again!!! *O*

[chloe1910]

wow...Jaejoong is really rather embittered here...A totlally different Yunjae here...

[samikitty]

haha... i didn't think it was so terrible when i wrote it, but my beta reader said to me: "... wow. are you feeling bitter today??? O_o" ^O^;;;; whoops... but yeah... i felt like trying something different. i hope it worked. ^^;;;;;

&heartsp

[samikitty]

this was kind of a terrible story to write, wasn't it? ^^;;;; i'm not sure why i was feeling this way yesterday... ^O^;;;

thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment~ ♥

[myfadingmelody]

i love this.
♥
jaejoong will never let go of what's rightfully his.

[samikitty]

thank you for reading and commenting! ♥♥