The Sleepover Chapter 3 Part 2

[fictionforeplay]

Sylar had heard the scream from four blocks away.  He heard the scream and knew it was Mohinder.  He dropped the newspaper he had been reading, taking off in the direction of Mohinder’s scream for help.  If he had had time, he would have been amused at this development. Wasn’t this something superheroes were supposed to do?

Comments

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

*gasps* Bad Sylar!! It's not going to make Momo happy when he finds out!

I loved this chapter, both parts!

[sylargrrrl]

Okay, so first of all you should know that you write these characters so very well because when Mohindy was getting his ass kicked I cringed and winced with each new act perpetrated against him. Same with when Sylar got his revenge against those little brats. I'm in love with the way you showed the two very different perspectives with Mohinder and then Sylar's point of views. Cannot wait to see what happens next. I squeed when I realized 'omg, new Sleepover chapters!? Hells yes.' Looking forward to the next!

[teecub]

Whoa. This is sooooo amazing! I am totally pleased with how Sylar reacted, no matter that it was pretty wrong. Mohinder reacted to it all perfectly, and Sylar - whoa. Their points of view are so different but so PERFECT for who they are. Once again, you've delivered a stunning piece of work! Thank you soooo much for sharing this with us! <3

[fictionforeplay]

Yay, I'm glad you all liked it! It was hard to decide what Sylar would do, because he's so unpredictable. I decided he would do whatever he had to to save Mohinder. I also wasn't sure whether to have him kill the people at the end, but I decided he would have done it and just let Mohinder think he didn't. No matter what Sylar says, he does care what Mohinder thinks of him. I even think that was evidenced in last Monday's episode. :]

[poemwithnorhyme]

Good job with this one! I especially like that Sylar is going to go and kick ass now, I know I would, XD.