The Sleepover Chapter 4

[fictionforeplay]

Should he be grateful or ashamed?  Mohinder didn’t know anymore.  The man had saved his life, done more than he had ever done for any human being, and Mohinder couldn’t even begin to explain why.  Sylar was an obvious sociopath, a man who needed no one and nothing but power.  When Mohinder was finally able to choke down some food, he

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[kael_raye]

Mohinder would wake in the morning, go into the living room and find that half of his worldly possessions had been broken in Sylar’s telekinetic orgasm.

XDXDXD Oh man! I burst into such a fit of giggles after reading that. You had the fic all good and fluffy with Mohinder watching Sylar sleep and then you put THAT in and...Heeeheehee!! The giggles still haven't stopped.

XD That was good! Oh yum! Thank you so much! :D

[greyelveneyes]

Very awesome, VERY hot, but I think the best part had to be this:

Mohinder would wake in the morning, go into the living room and find that half of his worldly possessions had been broken in Sylar’s telekinetic orgasm.

DUDE. I laughed so hard, because the idea of that much power escaping him when he orgasms is freakin' FUNNY.

You = WIN

[teecub]

Mmmm! I love it! Trust Mohinder to rush into his father's files to search for answers. Y'know, though, he probably could have asked Sylar (before his running off) and gotten a straight answer.... or not. Only, that isn't something poor Mohinder would likely do. You have their characters down pat and the story itself is LOVE! And the ending - haha! Poor Mohinder. Now he'll have to go use his sparse savings to buy new stuff for his apartment! Thanks for sharing <3

[mystic_jc]

Yes, YES, I definitely want more!! I love this fic and this chapter is so damn HOT!

[ladywilde80]

Mohinder thought that perhaps telekinesis was the best evolutionary ability of all time.

INDEED, Very hot! The smut was really intense and well-written.

Awesome Job! I really liked this~