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Carpet!yay

Feb 06, 2008 23:09

"We are never going to get that out of the carpet," The Indian man said, shaking his head in dismay. His lover reflected on the way his short black curls bounced as he did this, the locks wet and glossy with sweat.

"So what?" Sylar asked, leaning back into the sofa, stretching his naked body out languidly like some sort of feline, drawing Mohinder's ( Read more... )

mylar, crack

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ladywilde80 February 7 2008, 04:37:18 UTC

"Now shut up and flip over before this becomes a non-con."

*gigglesnort*

OMG. You win at life, ya know that right? That right there just made my whole night.

Cum stained carpets FTW ;)

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 04:46:00 UTC

Woohoo! There actually were a couple times when I was re-reading this for errors where I laughed. ...then I thought it was weird to laugh to my own fic and I shut up XP I added that non-con thing like RIGHT before I posted it. It just popped into my head.

I'm so glad you liked! I'ma add you to friends, okay? <3

kael_raye February 7 2008, 04:39:48 UTC

*sniggles*

"So what?" Sylar asked, leaning back into the sofa, stretching his naked body out languidly like some sort of feline, drawing Mohinder's eyes back to him.

BEST. MENTAL.IMAGE.EVER!!!

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 04:44:48 UTC

Mmm I know, isn't it though? ::gets lost in thoughts then remembers to post a few minutes later:: Aherm...

I'm going to add you to friends as well :D

poemwithnorhyme February 7 2008, 04:47:30 UTC

LOL! So great! Cum stained carpet, yesss...

Now shut up and flip over before this becomes a non-con." <--I concur with ladywilde80 on this one...soo funny! ^_^

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 04:56:26 UTC

::grin:: I added that line for you, because I said I was going to write a non-con and I haven't yet. When I write one, it shall be in your name Yaoi! :P

We already are friends, so I don't need to add you. :P

poemwithnorhyme February 7 2008, 05:05:18 UTC

XD! Aww, why thank you! And my name, huh? *blushes and is proud* ^_^ I hope you do one day, when you write non-con, it opens you up to everything else, it's a freeing feeling. Though I still can't write good fluff for the life of me..><

Yep, we are already friends, so no worries, lol

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 05:16:05 UTC

I loves me some non-con, I just want to make sure I do it justice when I write it. I has me some plot bunnies running around in my head about one, so hopefully I'll be able to type it out soon. :]

mabetini February 7 2008, 05:53:59 UTC

IM IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!!

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 08:45:05 UTC

::dances:: Yay! I'm glad you likied!

megmatthews20 February 7 2008, 08:40:00 UTC

This was very smexy!

I couldn't help but laugh at the line about Mohinder's "left lip pouting out slightly"...did you mean lower lip? The image I'm getting is a wee bit odd...

Other than that the whole thing roxered!

cheers

fictionforeplay February 7 2008, 08:44:22 UTC

And THAT is what I get for betaing my own stories. I just laughed SO hard when you pointed that out. No, Mohinder's lips are on the sides. He's got vertica-lips. It's fixed now. :P

megmatthews20 February 7 2008, 08:55:08 UTC

Little mis-types like that are the best! The way changing just one word can make something so strange...it's awesome.

I have a blast when I find mess-ups like that in my own stories.

This one is still making me laugh...I just had a hard time brushing my teeth in fact because I was giggling so hard. No offense, your writing is great...I'm just tired, and that was funny.

cheers!