The Sleepover Chapter 2

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“What are you working on?” Sylar asked as Mohinder shook his head to wake himself from the reverie of his thoughts.

“Not my research if that’s what you’re wondering,” Mohinder replied, eyes narrowing in Sylar’s direction.

Sylar chuckled, ignoring the obvious mistrust. “You’re up late tonight.

Comments

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

Ummm.. Guh. Sylar is hot when he wants his Momo.
Also, their argument was pure win. And Sylar would crush anyone he fell on, he should perhaps use that to his advantage more often.

[poemwithnorhyme]

Holy shit man! XD That was incredibly HOT. Wonderful job!

"I think you deserved a time out Mohinder.” <--XD! So great, this made me laugh..

Wonder Dope..LOL, This fic is very good. A mix of humor and sexiness, just what I like, mmm, ^_^

[levitatethis]

Oh my...wow...that's just...wow.

I love how you go back and forth with what each is thinking about the other.

Then the lead up and payoff is incredible.

[atomic_dawg]

hawt!! love the dialogue, love the smut! part of me was like "poor momo with the faucet sticking into his bad", but how bad can you feel for the guy when he's being seduced by a superhot Sylar?

i can't wait to read what's next, especially if it starts with mohinder still on his knees.

[lemmiki]

::drools:: Wait..huh what? Yes...comment. I need to focus now...GAH!
ONE WORD: HOT.
NOW I SHALL TYPE IN ALL CAPS JUST TO EMPHASIZE HOW AWESOME THIS WAS. AS YOU CAN TELL, IT WAS VERY VERY AWESOME. HO SHIT WOW.
::cough:: Yes...>.>; Good job. ^^;