Editor, editor!

[skellington1]

Dear Morgan Llywelyn;

You came highly recommended, so I'm trying to get through Red Branch, but it's only page 32 and I'm already ranting. Could your characters please cut the exposition? The general purple-hue gets old too.

But what's really driving me batty is tense agreement

Comments

[reconditarmonia]

I've never read the guy, but in his defense, sometimes people talk like that when they get caught up in telling a story.